By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be of dangerously experimental design.
A and she earned them at a time when avation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be
B earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew were
C earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were
D earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were
E earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were
A 选项og上的解释为 ：
This version is too wordy and does not contribute to clarity. Economical,clear expression connects earned directly with the noun speed records, which it modifies.
对og 上的这句解释有些疑惑： Economical,clear expression connects earned directly with the noun speed records, which it modifies.
那么如果是平行指代的话，them出现在宾语的位置，指代前面的speed records 感觉也是合情合理的。
另外
1、在Manhattan上，看到的关于and并列的部分
有这样一个解释：
当连接两个元素是长的独立句子时候，会用A，and B例如，I really like candy apples, AND I eat them often.
因此感觉A选项错的点不在这里。
2、然后在其他论坛上面看到的关于A选项的解释是由于So……that 是固定搭配；又或者是最后的she flew to be 中的to do 结构表示的是目的，而句子中想要表达的是种效果，才排除A选项。
感觉自己已经绕不出来了，求大神指点。。og 这么说是啥意思呢。
谢谢大家啦。
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