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发表于 2013-9-10 21:10:57
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好像把规则弄错了，嘛~先放这里吧：）
综合+独立（TPO24）
综合写作：In the lecture, the professor talks about dinosaur fossils found recently can't be provided to learn actual a nimal tissues and he states three ideas speculating what's said in the reading section in three ways:blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix.
Firstly, the professor states that the little branching channels inside are actually not that necessary, and he says there still exist hollows even through there are not real blood vessels of tissue things.This is just opposite against the reading material which shows that the remains of the actual blood vessels of tissue can be represented by this soft substance.
Then, the professor disagrees with the idea that substances containing red blood cells or iron, which is essential to the function and the size of red blood cells and is helpful to change oxygen to tissues.He then says that these spheres found inside the bone are likely to be some red minerals.
Last bu not the least, the speaker claims that collagen, the major factor of living bone tissues, can't last longer than 100 years, and this is a strong evidence to deny, in reading part, that the collagen matrix in the leg bone is related to bone tissue.
独立写作：I don't think it's the best way for parents to encourage their kids to take a part-time job because they waht their children to be more mature.Why?We must need to know work is not all that life means.
Being adualt means independence, both finantially and mentally, both of which can't be provided completely by part-time job.As we all know, this kind of job usually doesn't offer enough income for us to make a living, and what we get from it is maybe just a small part of our pocket money.In China, especially, students do part-time job most likely can get only one to two dollars per hour.After a day of hard work, we might buy a humberg and cocacola and surprisingly find that nothing can be left in our pocket and we are even not able to buy our parents a gift.Futhermore, most part-time job is very elementory and we can only do basic work for lack of experience and expertise.Doing this sort of job, well, porbably intresting and fresh in the beginning, but it can't obviously give us a sense of santisfaction.We can do it just for fun, but trust me, it do have little relation to independence, the adult life.
On the other hand, to become an eligible adult, we ought to know how to socialize efficiently, which means making new freinds and keep good relationship with old ones.In part-time job, we waste our time repeating the same thing, just the labor one.I remember when I have part-time job in Macdonal, I spend my entire day helping my clients odering Mexico chicken roll and chocolate ice-cream, after a seven-hour work, I return home and just want to sleep, thinking of nothing but rest.Nether do I spend time making freinds who I can contact for long time, but I don't watch movies with my boyfreind.It's so terrible.
Admittedly, taking part-time job give me an access to know how the quick food bands work their company, which may be helpful for my economic learning.But it's absolutely not that important for parents to ask their children to take part-time job! |
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发表于 2013-9-10 21:08:51
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一起进步^_^ 
