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楼主
发表于 2003-7-13 16:10:00 | 只看该作者

请教XDF-12--18

18. Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only
from the increasing demand for clerical workers but
also the higher profits made when highly paid
professionals are placed, requests for whom have
increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

(A) the higher profits made when highly paid
professionals are placed, requests for whom
(B) the higher profits that are made in the place-
ment of highly paid professionals, requests
for whom
(C) from the requests for highly paid professionals,
who make higher profits for the agencies
when placed and whose requests
(D) from highly paid professionals, whose place-
ment makes higher profits for the agencies
and whose requests
(E) from the higher profits made in placing highly
paid professionals, requests for whom


答案:E,请问C和E有什么区别是?为什么E更好?

谢谢。
沙发
发表于 2003-7-13 19:40:00 | 只看该作者
C whose request有问题。应该是对professional的request,而c好像是说professional本人的request增长。
板凳
发表于 2003-7-13 21:55:00 | 只看该作者
现在可以发表了吧
地板
发表于 2003-7-14 00:11:00 | 只看该作者
C在句子意思上有些问题,from the requests for highly paid professionals,
who make higher profits for the agencies中,make higher profits的不是professionals,而是requests for professionals,所以这里WHO从句修饰有些在逻辑上的改变。不过C的更明显的错误是WHEN和WHOSE从句修饰对象模糊,尤其是WHEN,它修饰什么?
5#
发表于 2003-7-14 01:29:00 | 只看该作者
C改变原句的意思.
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-15 19:23:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用braveMBA在2003-7-14 0:11:00的发言:
C在句子意思上有些问题,from the requests for highly paid professionals,
who make higher profits for the agencies中,make higher profits的不是professionals,而是requests for professionals,所以这里WHO从句修饰有些在逻辑上的改变。不过C的更明显的错误是WHEN和WHOSE从句修饰对象模糊,尤其是WHEN,它修饰什么?


现在越发觉得修饰非常重要,会直接影响意思。
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