[泪求解惑][老题新问]OG12 123新问，关于C选项中的时态

qiaowin88637 · 发表于 2012-4-27 18:17:54

123. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany,photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
(A) She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to
(B) Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to
(C) Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
(D) Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to
(E) She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in
答案C

这个问题可能很弱智，但楼主确实转不过弯来。。麻烦各位了。。

我觉得这道题C答案也是错的，因为主句中的时态LJ nevertheless earned...是过去时
而C选项中有明显的时间关系连词after she emigrated，也就说emigrate to New York是发生在LJ earned这些经历之前的，所以应该是after she had emigrated to New York(同A选项一样)
但是这样的话emigrate to NY之前在Germany的时态就变成了过去的过去的过去，明显没有这个时态存在。。。

所以难道这道题的主句时态是错的？应该是LJ earns才对吗？

跪求各位大侠解惑这个白痴的问题

泾渭不凡 · 发表于 2012-4-27 18:56:28

189. (OG12-123)
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to

B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to

C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in

D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to(C)

E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in

题目释义：she…..,photographer LJ….,and ……

考点：
句子结构，比较对象对等

1.Less要与than搭配，不能与(as) compared to搭配。

2.Run-on sentence.

aeoluseros关于run-on sentence知识点的补充说明：

找过很多解释，包括一些语法书(也包括老外的)、百度，始终觉得措辞上不合适，不过在一本手册上终于看到了满意的解释：

run-on sentence 连写句：

连写句指错误将两个独立分句合写在一个句子里面没有正确地用标点分离。

连写句有两种类型：

溶合句(fused sentence)：根本不使用标点把两个独立分句合写在一个句子里

逗号错误(comma splice):使用逗号但没有并列连词将两个独立分句写在一个句子里。

BTW: 所谓的独立分句即"主句"，其对应的是"从句"，都属于"分句"。

而run-on sentence的重点在于其改正方法：

1）分为两个句子

2）用一个逗号加上and, but, or或者其他并列连词

3）两个句子中间使用分号

This sentence compares the success J experienced after moving to New York to the success she had previously experienced in Germany. The phrase less successful anticipates the conclusion of the comparison with the phrase than… . The main subject of the sentence is photographer LJ , and the main verb is earned . The opening clause She was less successful…. Therefore creates a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjunction. The most efficient way to incorporate the information about J’s comparative successes in Germany and in New York is to turn the clause into an adjectival phase describing J. (FROM OG12)

选项分析：
A．Less successful… anticipates than rather than compared to… ; a comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence.

B．As compare to is an incorrect way to complete the comparison introduced by less; being… is unnecessarily wordy and awkward.

C．Correct.

D．When compared to is an incorrect phrase to complete the comparison introduced by less.

E．A comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence; past-perfect tense is misleading, since it refers to J’s experience in New York, which in fact followed her experience in Germany.

qiaowin88637 · 发表于 2012-4-27 19:00:57

谢谢回复。。但是这里面好像没有关于主句时态的说法

这里的after she emigrated...., Lotte Jacobi earned这样的时态是正确的吗？

泾渭不凡 · 发表于 2012-4-27 19:10:45

我吧，觉得这里滴less than是对success的高低程度，是两个句子整体的比较哇~

这个时态问题之前有讨论滴~~链接~~
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-482608-2-1.html

泾渭不凡 · 发表于 2012-4-27 19:22:36

还有。。那个after是连词的。。在这里不是介词的。。饭饭以为亲米有看出run-on错误，就纠结在时态咯~~
唔。。要是还米有懂的话~~等NN来哇~~亲加油~~嘻嘻~~~

qiaowin88637 · 发表于 2012-4-27 19:33:08

还有。。那个after是连词的。。在这里不是介词的。。饭饭以为亲米有看出run-on错误，就纠结在时态咯~~
唔。。要是还米有懂的话~~等NN来哇~~亲加油~~嘻嘻~~~

-- by 会员泾渭不凡 (2012/4/27 19:22:36)

谢谢噢！我去看看那个帖子

qiaowin88637 · 发表于 2012-4-30 10:44:44

还是不懂。。继续顶

呼叫各路神仙

guang88128 · 发表于 2012-6-30 01:05:16

我觉得是这样:

C中其实是两个动作, emigrate to NY, 和另外一个逻辑上的动作"successful in native land"

而successful in native land 是在emigrate之前发生的, 所以比较词than后面才用过去完成时表示一个比emigrate 更久远的动作那么相对的, emigrate就只能是一般过去式了

zwhjzwhj · 发表于 2012-7-13 20:03:02

还有。。那个after是连词的。。在这里不是介词的。。饭饭以为亲米有看出run-on错误，就纠结在时态咯~~
唔。。要是还米有懂的话~~等NN来哇~~亲加油~~嘻嘻~~~

-- by 会员泾渭不凡 (2012/4/27 19:22:36)

谢谢噢！我去看看那个帖子

-- by 会员 qiaowin88637 (2012/4/27 19:33:08)

那么这样也就解释了之前的争论，这道题究竟是比较句子success程度的，还是比较介词短语即时间段的，那么如果after是连词的话，（好像的确是，因为它后面跟了个句子she had emigrate），则不存在两个介词时间短语的比较喽？

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