【求助】OG12-066，并列定语从句？----已解决

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-10 11:29:57

The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
(A) include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
(B) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
(C) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
(D) includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
(E) includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
E: IT simply restates the subject of the previous phrase, introducing more words but no additional meaning;
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Q:如果有，1> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
2> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
3> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and which is
这三个东东有何区别？

Gail小M · 发表于 2011-4-10 11:53:44

2>right
3> Killer whale is the subject, 'which' is redundant.Just redundant, but still can be right.

1>wrong."it is famous for its aggressive"...is a complete sentence, however "which can grow to be.."is used to modify killer whale, is a Subordinate Clause. U cannot connect both of them just by adding"and".

If U wanna remain"it",at least, u should seperate the sentence, add a comma before" and it is.." however it is still awkward. "It" may has no CLEAR reference. U cannot point out that it refers to killer whale quickly.

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-10 12:51:21

2>right
3> Killer whale is the subject, 'which' is redundant.Just redundant, but still can be right.

1>wrong."it is famous for its aggressive"...is a complete sentence, however "which can grow to be.."is used to modify killer whale, is a Subordinate Clause. U cannot connect both of them just by adding"and".

If U wanna remain"it",at least, u should seperate the sentence, add a comma before" and it is.." however it is still awkward. "It" may has no CLEAR reference. U cannot point out that it refers to killer whale quickly.

-- by 会员 Gail小M (2011/4/10 11:53:44)

非常感谢Gail小M 再次相助！
很赞同你的想法！我开始的思路大概也这样！

However， A选项是谁的省略呢？：----------->>>> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
定语从句的省略，if any --------------->>> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and which is
我就晕了！

1 XDF说，定语从句引导词并列不能省略
2 古镯大牛又有如下看法

　　四、当and, but, or等连词连接两个或两个以上的定语从句修饰一个先行词时,关系代词第一个可省略,第二、第三个等不可省略。例如:

　　This is the book (which) I read yesterday and which I found very interesting. 这就是我昨天读的那本书,它很有趣。

　　You have many people around you (whom) you always turn to and whom you will never forget.你身边有很多人,你经常向他们求助,你永远不要忘记他们。

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-11-30 23:26:54编辑过]

-- by 会员古镯 (2004/11/30 23:21:00)

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我努力劝说自己：此题定语从句引导词which在从句中作主语与1 2不同，因此满足并列省略条件，
但是
省略的前提是清晰啊！
习惯仰望权威的偶，说服不了自己，还是来请教NN吧

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-10 13:01:42

顺便问下，在选择是“S1 V1 O1，and S2 V2 O2 ”还是“S1 V1 O1 and S2 V2 O2”时，该注意哪些呢？

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-11 09:37:45

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-12 07:58:28

aeoluseros · 发表于 2011-4-12 09:29:45

A选项是谁的省略呢？：----------->>>> include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
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是which的省略，主语相同。
古镯前辈的例子貌似出自张振邦语法，她说的现象我在GMAT里面没有见到过现存例子。
GMAT有它自己的家规，貌似不接受古镯前辈说的那种类型的双重关系分句。
garthur有时间可以在张振邦语法里查一下“双重关系分句”的语法点，大概在1300+页。

在S1 V1 O1，and S2 V2 O2 ”还是“S1 V1 O1 and S2 V2 O2时，
要看这是不是已经是一个完整句子。
如果S1 V1 O1，and S2 V2 O2已经是一个完整句子，那么and前要逗号。
如果S1 V1 O1and S2 V2 O2 只是一个分句，前后还有一个if, so ... that等类似的状语，那么and前可以不用逗号。

kingarthur00 · 发表于 2011-4-13 13:10:52

再次感谢斑斑aeoluseros！

superbat28 · 发表于 2011-7-21 18:38:51

再次感谢斑斑aeoluseros！

-- by 会员 kingarthur00 (2011/4/13 13:10:52)

斑主在6楼那个解释是什么意思，没有看懂啊……garthur用没有句子实例解个惑啊~

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