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第二篇作文,请大家帮忙给点意见!
我觉得这个题目很难,所以写得很烂……特别是结尾,没有时间。:(
I always hear people discuss about different restaurants and food stands on campus and I realized that different people have different choices among restaurants and food stands. While some people like to eat at food stands or restaurants, I prefer eating at home.
First of all, I think that eating at home is cleaner. I always make sure that I have cleaned the dishes well, washed the vegetable thoroughly, and cooked the food deeply. Eating clean food is very important. As I learned in my food science class, eating pork that is not well done can cause serious problem.
Secondary, eating at home has more flexibility compared to eating in a restaurant or a food stand. Since different people have different favor in tastes, it is easier adjust when a person eats at home. For example, I always find foods in restaurant are too salty, therefore, eating at home can provide me more satisfactory. Moreover, eating at home provides a more relaxed environment. A person does not need to dress up if he/she eats at home; he/she can lays on the couch and watch TV while enjoying his/her delicious meal.
Even though eating at home has the advantages I have discussed above comparing to eating outside, eating at a restaurant or food stand also has its own advantages. Food stands and restaurants make people’s lives easier by eliminating the long process of cooking. However, I think that as long as I have time, I prefer cook by myself and eat at home.
While eating at home is clean and flexible, it may cause some inconveniences. Therefore, I made a commitment to myself: eat outside during test weeks, eat at home during relax days.
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