which结构与冒号那个更好？

traviszhu · 发表于 2010-5-10 18:41:55

Less detrimental than the effects of bacterial transformation is the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding, decay of wood, and other undesirable alterations of substances.
(A) is the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding
(B) are the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding
(C) is the effects of bacterial deterioration, which include spoilage of food, metals corroding
(D) are the effects of bacterial deterioration, which includes spoilage of food, corrosion of metals
(E) are the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, corrosion of metals
这个题里面的D选项的which结构有错吗？还是说冒号的结构比which更好？

traviszhu · 发表于 2010-5-10 21:09:37

自己顶

jtrchina · 发表于 2010-5-10 21:17:36

选项D中which指代有歧义：
距离Which最近的是bacterial deterioration，而原文是讲effects include……，which应该指代effects.尽管which在特殊情况下可以指代介词前的核心词，然而从语法上讲，which的就近指代导致了从句主语的指代模糊。

xyh133 · 发表于 2010-5-11 14:35:18

同意楼上，一般在选项中看到which指代，必错的

anguslu24 · 发表于 2011-8-10 17:06:38

选E，CD中一个include用了单数，另一个后面内容形式没有并列，所以选冒号那个E

小伊YSY · 发表于 2011-8-10 17:49:32

我有一个很蠢的疑问。

为什么我觉得后面的列举属于bacterial deterioration而非effects of bd呢？
同是变化的过程吧……

which结构与冒号那个更好？

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