83. Ranked among great mathematical scientists such as Archimedes, Kepler, and Newton, Abu Ali al-Hasan ibn al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as on philosophical arguments. A. al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as B. al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on experiment as well as C. al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E., and who experimented extensively with light and vision, thereby laid the foundation for modern optics and also for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also D. al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., and had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also E. al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimenting extensively with light and vision and laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion of science being based on experiment as well as
A: 过去完成时没有必要;being based应该去掉being,of +名词+分词应该替换同位语从句;and also the notion和前面有平行的歧义 B: correct C: 没有谓语;on not only… but also on不平行 D: and前面的逗号多余;had experimented 应该过去时;on not only… but also on不平行 E: being based应该去掉being
注意: 1、 of +名词+分词没有用从句表达清晰 2、 并列名词修饰语的平行不能产生歧义,for ..and for.. 第一遍做没有问题.但是今天做..排了其他三个剩下B.E,最后想了 半天选E,结果是错的.... 选E虽然那个 was born in Iraq 有点不太对,但是其他的都相当对称如 experimenting和laying 还有for modern optics and for the notion.. B排,因为他加了SHOULD,XDF老师说的情态动词不能乱加啊 NN帮忙看看嘛 先谢谢了
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