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楼主
发表于 2004-8-6 19:27:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]【逵逵写作文5.0】

Topic: It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?



According to the limitations of books, it is true that people do not learn everything in books. To some extent, people can learn knowledge from experience in their social activities and work. But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge by reading books has more advantages in many ways. There are some reasons as follows.



First, the books are the primary media of learning. Since the papermaking technology was originated in ancient china, books have accompanied people a long time. Mainly, people write books in the intention to pass knowledge from one generation to another. Books may contain all things of human and nature. With the development of publication industry, more and more books are issued from stream-of-consciousness novels to popular science readings about the black hole. Thanks to the books that we have not to depend on folklore to proceed our broad and profound cultures. Furthermore, experience is abstract and just useful individually. Usually, people should write down what the experience is to make it explicit and intelligible. Books embody knowledge rather than experience.



Second, as we see, not every person possesses the skill of summarizing knowledge from experience. Hence, students go to school study with their teachers' help. Learning is a gradual process. People should spend many years on the threshold of their lifetime learning the basic knowledge. I cannot image that people do not study the alphabet first. Experience, of course, support you special knowledge. But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books. This is the requirement of your career. Moreover, people cannot afford to do something and opportunities are not available. For instance, just astronauts have the chance to go outer space. Nevertheless, people can look at the pictures and description of the moon in books.  



Finally, people can read books whenever they want or have time to. People can also choice a nice place to read at ease. However, people who learn through experience may be not so satisfied. Although employees are currently required more experience eligible for their jobs, I agree with the books are more eventful for people to get knowledge.



In a word, books are recourse of knowledge. From children to adults, people all widen knowledge by reading books. Books make people intelligent and happy. Even though the popularization of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe books will continue to exist and play a significant role in people's life as they do before.


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-6 23:05:00 | 只看该作者

怎么搞的,竟然没有好心人给我看看~伤心的~

不顶一下真是要沉没在帖子堆里了~

我顶!

板凳
发表于 2004-8-6 23:14:00 | 只看该作者

画线部分有语法问题或者用词不当.   写完自己要先读一下.  用词比以前成熟了很多. 思路时候尚不大清晰.  总得来说进步很大.  

But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge by reading books has more advantages in many ways.

Books embody knowledge rather than experience.

But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books.

I agree with the books are more eventful for people to get knowledge.

Even though the popularization of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe

地板
发表于 2004-8-6 23:20:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用likui在2004-8-6 23:05:00的发言:

怎么搞的,竟然没有好心人给我看看~伤心的~


不顶一下真是要沉没在帖子堆里了~


我顶!



唉, 老kui,  你也太没耐心的说了.   偶忙到要死.


5#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-6 23:42:00 | 只看该作者
But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge by reading books has more advantages in many ways.

不是有that+完整句子+谓语~ 的结构的吗?


Books embody knowledge rather than experience.


就是说书本使知识更具体化,这个怎么表达?


But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books.


need做助动词不行的吗?


I agree with the books are more eventful for people to get knowledge.


eventful adj.=important 这样用不好吗?


Even though the popularization of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe


用Despite替换就行了吧?

你,还有南瓜大姐头,和pengstone是钦定的批改者,逃不掉的,逃了我就打滚闹腾~


6#
发表于 2004-8-7 00:14:00 | 只看该作者

以下是引用likui在2004-8-6 23:42:00的发言:


But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge by reading books has more advantages in many ways.

不是有that+完整句子+谓语~ 的结构的吗?


你是说主语从句啊,严重告诫你不要用。


Books embody knowledge rather than experience.


就是说书本使知识更具体化,这个怎么表达?


呵呵,牛的。。  建议: Books could embody the knowledge more than experiences of human beings.


But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books.


need做助动词不行的吗?


need跟make的用法都有使、要的含义,建议不要一起用,而且英语中need用做助动词的情况不多,用need的及物动词就可以。


I agree with the books are more eventful for people to get knowledge.


eventful adj.=important 这样用不好吗?


这里agree with后面加宾语从句不对,把介词去掉。eventful是重要的,是那种变故多的类似意思,跟一般important 不一样,建议不要用恐怕产生歧义的词。


Even though the popularization of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe


用Despite替换就行了吧?


除了的意思么。。可以了

你,还有南瓜大姐头,和pengstone是钦定的批改者,逃不掉的,逃了我就打滚闹腾~

不许耍赖。。。

不过大有进步,不错不错


加油!!

7#
发表于 2004-8-7 00:53:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 0:46:00的发言:

逵逵啊, 偶搬家累的要死, 刚刚才上来看看, 居然就这样被扁。。。。



外面在下雪了。。。kuikui 要负责的哦。。。
8#
发表于 2004-8-7 00:55:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 0:48:00的发言:



火气爆大, 找偶看你文章可以短信给偶吧, 给个连接偶更好找的啊






估计kuikui没有想到还有短信。。消消气。。
9#
发表于 2004-8-7 00:57:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 0:53:00的发言:

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Books could embody the knowledge more than experiences of human beings DO.


加一个do在最后可能更明确


不错不错。。。


还有, 逵逵你不是答应了用绿色的嘛


这个粉红色偶看了就有


hoho,偶反正是看到眼睛近视。。要求补偿。。。

10#
发表于 2004-8-7 01:22:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 1:11:00的发言:



送给那个爱用粉红色的人:

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