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自己的拙作一篇,第一次写GMAT作文

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楼主
发表于 2003-10-8 09:50:00 | 只看该作者

自己的拙作一篇,第一次写GMAT作文

the arguer believe that successful individuals typically set their next goal somewhat----but not too much---above their last achievement. in this way, they steadily raise their level of aspiration. i agree with the speaker insofar as people can pursuit for their success practically, self-confidently and never boringly freshly.

the first reason can be seen by every person that achieving success is based on the practical plan and many failure. there is a good example to support my position. we can learn from the experience of the great inventor thomas alva edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success. the voluminous personal papers of edison reveal that his inventions typically did not spring to life in a flash of inspirationbut evolved slowly from previous woks.
further support can be found in the case of getting much more self-confidence after succeeding in tasks. when i was in high school, i was anxious for getting quite high grades to enter the first class universities in china. in chinese education system, the grades are the most essential requirement for young students rolling into ideal universities. when my grade was not high enough as my expectation, i was upset and frustrated those bad results time after time. after adjusting my emotion, i set some small goals which were a little higher than the former one. i got the ideal score to enter the first classic university through making progress little by little!
the third and very important reason is that we can pursuit for our dreams without sacrificing our avocation. success can bring us happiness and happiness can make us succeed too! various avocation can add color to our life as can success. in my case, i never give up making my dreams come true because success can make me happy and self-confidence. my philosophy is that combination of working and amusement is the best way. some friends of mine are very successful in their career but they often tell me how painful they are. some of them have such weak health situations that they can not continue to succeed as can they previously. that is so pity! in modern society, successful individuals should have not only good intelligence but also healthy bodies! steadily raising our level of aspiration is the wise choice to success individuals because we can enjoy our colourful life everyday which is combined by our diligent working and interesting avocations.
it may be concluded that, therefore, that successful individuals typically set their next goal somewhat----but not too much---above their last achievement. in this way, they steadily raise their level of aspiration.
大家给些意见,我这个文章哪些可以得到5分,哪些不能得到5分呢?谢谢大家的帮助!!!对于这个文章,大家给的鸡蛋越多越好哦
沙发
发表于 2003-10-8 09:51:00 | 只看该作者
请把题目和题号贴出来
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2003-10-8 10:09:00 | 只看该作者
Issue no 52
Topic: “successful individuals typically set their next goal somewhat----but not too much---above their last achievement. In this way, they steadily raise their level of aspiration.”
In your opinion, how accurate is this statement? Explain, using specific reasons and examples from your reading, your own experience, or your observation of others.
感谢斑竹的批评指导,呵呵。
地板
发表于 2003-10-9 20:49:00 | 只看该作者
1、不要照搬原文。这很不好,而且搬了两遍。给人的印象不好

文章总体还不错


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 楼主| 发表于 2003-10-20 09:01:00 | 只看该作者
thanks anchoret!!! can you tell me the corresponding score of my essay? I am anxious for your evaluation.
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