一个ESSAY的理解.

albert · 发表于 2003-10-11 05:09:00

这是Ivey的essay

If you had an extra day in the week (8 day week) what would you do with that extra day?

这个问题是否可以理解为业余爱好或者活动? 但是问得很奇怪. 因为这些事情Weekend都可以做的. 为什么需要第8天? 正在考虑中...大家请提提看法.

tsljz · 发表于 2003-10-11 07:08:00

和weekend没有什么关系，我认为其实就是如果你有更多的时间，你会把时间用于什么地方。

sfish · 发表于 2003-10-11 07:11:00

You may use that day to improve yourself, stay with family, or contribute to your community. You also can use that day to work.

tsljz · 发表于 2003-10-11 07:17:00

don't use the whole to work, no one will believe you. you may spend a few hours doing this, and spending a few hour doing that.

valentine · 发表于 2003-10-11 11:41:00

Try to balance with others essays.

V.

albert · 发表于 2003-10-12 05:12:00

以下是引用tsljz在2003-10-11 7:17:00的发言：
don't use the whole to work, no one will believe you. you may spend a few hours doing this, and spending a few hour doing that.

谢谢tsljz..你的意思是什么都需要做一点在第8天？
我能不能只写做一件事情？（而且和工作无关的，比如和家人在一起啊，或者去做一件自己爱好的事情啊）。。我觉得这一天不太适合写工作。

谢谢指教！

albert · 发表于 2003-10-12 05:17:00

以下是引用sfish在2003-10-11 7:11:00的发言：
You may use that day to improve yourself, stay with family, or contribute to your community. You also can use that day to work.

谢谢sfish..你所说的这些我考虑过。。这个问题是否想看看 what the applicants care most?
但是其实这些都是可以在WEEKEND做的。。如果你放到一个extra day去做，是否意味着你平时周末都没有 improve yourself, stay with family or contribute to your community?

欢迎大家指教！

albert · 发表于 2003-10-12 05:22:00

以下是引用valentine在2003-10-11 11:41:00的发言：
Try to balance with others essays.

V.

Thank you, valentine..

But I still can't get the essential of this essay question..I don't know what the admission officer want to learn from this essay...Can this essay be understand as " what the applicant concern most if they have another day, a day the applicant don't have to work "?

tsljz · 发表于 2003-10-12 07:43:00

以下是引用albert在2003-10-12 5:12:00的发言：

谢谢tsljz..你的意思是什么都需要做一点在第8天？
我能不能只写做一件事情？（而且和工作无关的，比如和家人在一起啊，或者去做一件自己爱好的事情啊）。。我觉得这一天不太适合写工作。

谢谢指教！

No, you don't have to do everything in the extra day. What I mean was to do one to two things. Don't just work in that day. And don't just relax as well.

一个ESSAY的理解.

一个ESSAY的理解.

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