求助大神几个问题

jasonstark · 发表于 2013-11-26 06:50:58

Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, public audience.
A. Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is
B. Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, but which is
C. Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become
D. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become
E. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is

关于正确选项c，不是说修饰语要紧邻被修饰成分吗？c中的that难道没有就近修饰conversation的歧义？
我还想请教下which的跳跃指代问题，这个直接搞晕了，感觉一会可以跳跃指代，一会又不可以

skyemotion · 发表于 2013-11-26 14:42:32

C中的that不能修饰conversation，因为意思不通

haiyueqinhui · 发表于 2013-11-26 18:21:58

私以为that与which在跳跃指代上的使用差不多，不同的就是that是essential, which只能前面有逗号，non-essential。

which的跳跃指代只会出现在noun + 介词 + noun的情况，which指代谁看逻辑以及从句谓语动词的提示，有一定的ambuity风险

jasonstark · 发表于 2013-11-26 19:24:41

skyemotion 发表于 2013-11-26 14:42
C中的that不能修饰conversation，因为意思不通

仅仅可以因为意思不同就排除吗？我觉得c选项中的radio离that实在是太远了，不妥。

jasonstark · 发表于 2013-11-26 19:26:19

haiyueqinhui 发表于 2013-11-26 18:21
私以为that与which在跳跃指代上的使用差不多，不同的就是that是essential, which只能前面有逗号，non-essen ...

也就是第一个noun是核心词汇，介词加noun做后置定语是吧？但是我做题的时候发现有些时候可以跳跃，有些时候不可以跳跃，纠结了。看来用which就近指代这一考点排除选项还是有一定的风险啊。

haiyueqinhui · 发表于 2013-11-26 20:05:35

jasonstark 发表于 2013-11-26 19:26
也就是第一个noun是核心词汇，介词加noun做后置定语是吧？但是我做题的时候发现有些时候可以跳跃，有些时 ...

我的意思是：
which一般来说都是就近指代：
In attempting to solve the problems caused by a lowering of the price of oil, oil companies operating in the North Sea have taken a variety of approaches, which include reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently from smaller fields, and finding innovative ways to cut the cost of building and operating platforms.

跳跃指代基本都是N+介词+N才出现的，视情况而定：一个是which只能指代物，一个是从句的逻辑意思，另一个就是从句的谓语动词：

Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886,outnumber her letters to anyone else.
通过were，意思，以及不能指代人，所以which跳跃了~

The commission proposed that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be obtained through a local bond issue.
这个就不能跳了。。

jasonstark · 发表于 2013-11-26 20:56:46

haiyueqinhui 发表于 2013-11-26 20:05
我的意思是：
which一般来说都是就近指代：
In attempting to solve the problems caused by a lowering ...

秒懂了，非常感谢大神

haiyueqinhui · 发表于 2013-11-26 21:34:13

jasonstark 发表于 2013-11-26 20:56
秒懂了，非常感谢大神

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