OG12 SC 36的另一种理解，请指正！

haibaraaifly · 发表于 2012-2-25 20:17:16

36. Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,
Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier’s
pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age
of (22, was injured three times, and was discharged in
1783 because she had become) too ill to serve.
(A) 22, was injured three times, and was discharged
in 1783 because she had become
(B) 22, was injured three times, while being
discharged in 1783 because she had become
(C) 22 and was injured three times, and discharged
in 1783, being
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in
1783 because she was
(E) 22, having been injured three times and
discharged in 1783, being
不知怎么打下划线，各位指导一下~
对于D选项，injured three times不能作为joined the Continental Army 的伴随状语是不是因为从逻辑上理解意思不正确啊。因为我刚做该题的时候并不知道and有A选项的用法，所以自然而然的把injured three times当做修饰前面joined 的伴随状语了，但是后来想想发现意思不对，所以想请问一下大家是不是这个原因。

haibaraaifly · 发表于 2012-2-25 21:07:36

up~~

stephanie213 · 发表于 2012-2-25 21:25:25

问题在于injure必须要用被动语态，因为单纯的injure是损伤，损害的意思，是主动的。而要表示人受伤了，一定是被弄伤的，所以必然是被动了，injure表示人受伤都必须是i am injured（by)...
其次，的确受伤不能作为加入部队的伴随。加入部队是一个动作，完整即止的。受伤是以后的事情了，当然不能伴随啦

haibaraaifly · 发表于 2012-2-25 21:29:53

关于第一个解释我还是不明白噢，injured three times这种用法不就是将she was injured three times用作伴随状语了吗？

stephanie213 · 发表于 2012-2-25 21:53:58

关键是injured不能伴随join啊，我上面说了啊join 是一个动作，发生了即就结束了的。injure是在join之后发生的，而不是加入的时候正好就受伤了，这个不能伴随啊

haibaraaifly · 发表于 2012-2-25 23:44:39

恩，这点我明白了...谢谢啦！

fpd · 发表于 2012-12-2 22:42:48

如果这里是 modifier modify DS的话，injuried ，最好是紧邻其修饰词的，也就是放在dressed 之后，但是，前面已经是一个相似的modifier了，如果一堆modifier 放在一起，这个句子就会不简洁，繁杂，所以干脆平行多好啊，又方便，又简洁。

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