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slr257 · 发表于 2012-10-8 03:07:31

Of all the earthquakes in European history, the earthquake that destroyed Lisbon in 1755 is perhaps the most famous. 可以把the earthquake 改成the one吗？如果可以，哪个更好？

DUKB24 · 发表于 2012-10-8 08:25:27

Of all the earthquakes in European history, the earthquake that destroyed Lisbon in 1755 is perhaps the most famous. 可以把the earthquake 改成the one吗？如果可以，哪个更好？

-- by 会员 slr257 (2012/10/8 3:07:31)

you should not fix the sentence, unless the one you fixed clearly appears in the answer choice

please further clarify

slr257 · 发表于 2012-10-8 10:06:13

Sorry... God Ke forgive me pls.....My point is - which one is better?

DUKB24 · 发表于 2012-10-8 10:17:58

Sorry... God Ke forgive me pls.....My point is - which one is better?

-- by 会员 slr257 (2012/10/8 10:06:13)

both seem plausible.....

there must be some other more explicit splits when u encounter such two choice

slr257 · 发表于 2012-10-8 10:39:21

Yes, I think so too..... Hope the difference is subtle enough......

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