4./DQ522 Framed by traitorous colleagues, Alfred Dreyfus was imprisoned for twelve years before there was exoneration and his freedom.
(A) there was exoneration and his freedom
(B) he was to be exonerated with freedom时态不对
(C) being exonerated and freed(D) exoneration and his freedom 如果用D,要用his exoneration and freedom(C)
(E) being freed, having been exonerated
能否帮助分析一下各选项的错误
我感觉C也不对 因为补全后补全:before he was being exonerated and freed
谢谢
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(A)(D)exoneration表泛指, 无所有格(his)表示, 造成泛指与特指并列
(B)was to be表在过去动作中的将来式
(D)before exoneration and his freedom, 言之无物
(E)having been exonerated接在逗号后面, 表伴随结果不恰当
ANSC), 然而我觉得用被动进行式的表达不那么好, 未能与before前面形成一个并列模式, 但矮子挑将军, 将就吧!!
支持狗狗的看法:
大众的免罪(exoneration),
个人的自由(freedom)。
谢谢狗狗和stoneren
明白了
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