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ran2010zx · 发表于 2011-3-29 10:38:39

9. A controversial figurethroughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated thatsome Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibilityof freedom.
(A)that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized thepossibility of freedom
(B)that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility offreedom to him
(C)that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized thepossibility of freedom to him
(D)some Black’s returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized thepossibility of freedom（A）
(E)some Black’s return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him,Africa
这里的D如果把which从句后面的was换成were并且returning换成return是不是就对了？
我觉得D除了主谓一致应该没啥错误吧，其实我觉得advocate 后面跟some Black’s return更好些，讨论下哈~

ttc12345 · 发表于 2011-3-29 15:22:58

1.D选项which 修饰前面的AFRICA 也就是说some blacks要到对于他来说象征自由的非洲，而不是表达要去非洲这个地方，过于SPECIFIC ，而且整个句子非常繁琐，不简洁，在gmat中不算effective的选项
2.advocate，report， recommend 类似的词后面用that表达意思

西瓜2011 · 发表于 2011-3-29 16:07:35

同意楼上啊。WHICH 指代不明。句子表意罗嗦。能说A RETURN就不要用A'S RETURING嘛。

ran2010zx · 发表于 2011-3-30 16:29:38

同意楼上啊。WHICH 指代不明。句子表意罗嗦。能说A RETURN就不要用A'S RETURING嘛。

-- by 会员西瓜2011 (2011/3/29 16:07:35)

也对，谢谢啊呵呵

ran2010zx · 发表于 2011-3-30 16:29:53

1.D选项which 修饰前面的AFRICA 也就是说some blacks要到对于他来说象征自由的非洲，而不是表达要去非洲这个地方，过于SPECIFIC ，而且整个句子非常繁琐，不简洁，在gmat中不算effective的选项
2.advocate，report， recommend 类似的词后面用that表达意思

-- by 会员 ttc12345 (2011/3/29 15:22:58)

THX~~~

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