关于og中给的wordy, awkward的解释，求教各位！！到底什么算wordy?

wynyy2000 · 发表于 2011-3-19 22:55:37

The results of the company's costcutting measures are evident in its profits, which inreased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it fell over the last two year.
C. which have increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after falling.
D. with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling
OG官方解释，说D选项以with 开头显得wordy, awkward..
到底哪里wordy?
另一道题也是这个原因：
Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie Smith and Duke Elington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A. Theloniou Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
D.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
我选的A，但OG解释这么写很wordy?

jy4780163 · 发表于 2011-3-20 00:32:01

你和D 比较就能看出来 wordy了呗。。wordy 是要比较才能看出来的。。。能直接表达当然比用从句简洁多~

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