求助一道GWD-TN第24套里的语法

zhongyaya · 发表于 2010-10-31 12:05:59

A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States
hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health car, education, and environment.

A.they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting

B.they denounce big government—they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful—but supporting at the same time

C.they denounce big government, they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time

D.while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting

E.while they are denouncing big government—they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful—supporting at the same time

答案选A

zhongyaya · 发表于 2010-11-1 13:08:43

顶啊~

Christianyang · 发表于 2010-11-1 17:11:56

A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States
hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health car, education, and environment.

A.they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting

B.they denounce big government—they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful—but supporting at the same time
没有but doing的用法
C.they denounce big government, they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
是个run-on sentence
D.while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
这选项连个主句都没有
E.while they are denouncing big government—they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful—supporting at the same time
也是连主句都没有而且现在进行时在这里感觉别扭中间的那个错误没有补上that supporting的用法就更weird了

jackiehuang · 发表于 2010-11-2 10:26:18

A.they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
saying。。。。while at the same time supporting,用来修饰they，整句话没什么语法错误

B.they denounce big government—they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful—but supporting at the same time
去掉破折号之间的，剩下来的是， they denounce...but supporting...不能够平行

C.they denounce big government, they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
太冗长了，基本被我排除掉，GMAT不喜欢，而且it指代不明，at the same time 要放到support之前，at the same time they support sth

D.E错误太明显

zhongyaya · 发表于 2010-11-2 16:44:11

现在懂了~原来主要纠结于A和B~又受高中语法干扰，说是say不及物，立马就选了B~看了两位的讲解明白了~谢谢啦~

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