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发表于 2010-10-28 19:28:50 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Topic:Young people enjoy life more than older people do
People are born not to suffer but to live a pleased life. Both young people and older people have the right to enjoy life, and the question raised now is who can enjoy more.
Young people may think they can. They have just passed less than one third of the whole life, which means they still have tens of years to live. They have the capital called "youth" and they can invest it in the future to live a better life. They can make a plan for themselves, try their best to reach the goal and taste the achievement of success. What's more, the less than thirty years they have lived before are under the protection of their parents and society. They can enjoy life more because they still do not have experienced what true darkness or desperate is.
Older people may not agree. They claim they have fought and strived for more than half of their lifes, they have completed the responsibility for their children and society, it's time for them to take a rest. They do not need to worry about futures as long as they had done their duties before. Moreover, older people have tasted the bitter of live before and they will cherish the sweet life more than younger people.
In my opinion, I believe an old saying "attitude decides everything." Who can enjoy the life more does not have the relationship with age but with the attitude towards life. Different people have different definition towards the word "enjoy". Some may satisfy with a piece of cake while some are not happy with countless treasure. Greed is endless. There is no possibility to fulfill every wish one has. Life will treat a person at the way he thinks of it. The one who can enjoy life more is the person who can take a positive attitude towards it.

自己拿WORD纠错了……其他就是担心会不会太感性了?
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