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CD22-verbal-11 之天山-7-14 请教NN我的分析对否

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楼主
发表于 2007-6-25 01:22:00 | 只看该作者

CD22-verbal-11 之天山-7-14 请教NN我的分析对否

CD-V-11T-3-Q17.
    
天山-7-14

Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an effort to buy First Interstate Bank until a merge agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.

A.      is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merge agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were

B.       is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merge agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was

C.       is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merge agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were

D.      are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merge agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was

E.       are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merge agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were

之前我选的是C,思考后觉得不对,分析如下,请NN指正。

BD:虚拟语气中,was应该用 were,排除;

Eare expected to 中的 are 从原文逻辑意思看应该用单数,因此排除;

关于C的错误有2点(如还有其他错误,请指正):

修饰歧义:with a provision for penalties 修饰的是them,但实际上其应该修饰的是a merge agreement

代词指代错误:前面说的是one of the potential investors,后面用them,是否犯了代词指代不一致的错误?

NN一定帮忙看看,这道题以前有人问过,但无人具体解答,非常感谢!


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沙发
发表于 2007-6-25 02:03:00 | 只看该作者

one of the potential investors是单数, FIB也是单数, them没有指代. C的be signed也没道理, 没必要用subjunctive mood. 而且sign agreement的应该是seller, 不是 investor, 所以我支持A, 干脆省了sign agreement的subject.

板凳
发表于 2007-6-25 02:16:00 | 只看该作者

同意LS

until引导时间状语,后面跟一句话而且不用虚拟。所以 be signed错~

另外想说的是D项:are expected to be making an offer to buy, to be doing不好~ 

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-25 11:54:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢LS二位的解答;

觉得sign agreement的是本次“兼并交易”的双方:投资者与银行,直到双方签定协议投资者才肯进行兼并交易,所以选了C的signed by them...

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发表于 2008-1-24 16:02:00 | 只看该作者
但是A选项中的 agreement is signed that  中的 that  应该是修饰agreement  但它没有紧跟先行词,这样对吗?  
6#
发表于 2008-10-3 19:24:00 | 只看该作者

Not one 对应的谓语应该为单数,if the deal为虚拟语气,until后面为句子

Athat…agreement的定语从句,为避免头重脚轻,所以放在is signed后面。

B they的指代对象不清,was时态不对,主句是一般现在时没有理由无缘无故用过去时,用虚拟语气是可以解释的

C. until be signed不对

DEare 不对,因为not one of…是单数

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