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Do you agree or disagree

Twenty years later, people would have more leisure time than they have now?

A multitude of great inventions have made a huge change for our daily life. Currently, in the competition society, technology is developing at an
                unprecedented speed. Computers, washing machines, air-conditions, all of these are playing a crucial part in our life. And
                they have brought about a tremendous number of benefits for us. With the further development of technology, from my perspective, people will gain more leisure time after twenty years.

At present, only in front of the computers, can we receive many things which we want. Novel books, watches, even cameras are all available via the Internet. In other word, it is an optimal choice to purchase via the Internet.
                It saves us a great deal of time. Therefore, we may have more leisure time to do other things we are interested. It will suffice to mention my own experience. Last month, I had to deal with a science test. At that time, there was merely one week left. And even more unfortunately, there were no related reference books in hand and the bookshop in our city did not sell these books. I was so baffled. All of sudden, a thought that I can buy some books in the net shop occurred to my mind. Then, I searched several related books and ordered them in a website. The next days, the books that I wanted were delivered. It only took a day for me. Finally, thanks to these books, I obtained a high score in my test. Thus, in the next twenty years, more sorts of goods, I believe, will be sold in the Internet and shopping through the Internet will be prevalent among people. Therefore, we will not dissipate much time on the way of shopping and more spare time can be received.

In addition, the robots, as far as I am concerned, will emerge in our houses. Every morning, he will wake us up and prepare the meal for us. After we go to work, the house may be cleaned by them. They will operate the washing machines to help us handle dirty clothes simultaneously. Before we go back home, an abundant meal will be on the table. Via the help of the robots, we will not have to stay in the house in to cleaning and washing every evening. We have spare time to go out with our friend to see the film or go shopping. In the future, we will not be so tired as present and we can focus the attention on my work entirely. It will be a comfortable life truly.

In conclusion, the rapid development of the society is leading to our life becoming much easy and relaxed. Consequently, we can spend more time on our interests and entertainments.

A multitude of great
inventions have made a huge change for our daily life. Currently, in the
competition society, technology is developing at an unprecedented speed.
Computers, washing machines, air-conditions, all of these are playing crucial roles in our life. And
            they
have brought about a tremendous number of benefits for us. With the further
development of technology(in the light of the
developing speed of modern technology), from my perspective, people will
gain more leisure time after twenty years.

At present, only in
front of the computers can we receive many things which we want(这里可以幽默一下:In last
century, I tenaciously held the view that communalism was an impossible goal
for human being to attain. However, the emergence of internet utterly change my
mind.).
Novel books, watches, even cameras are all available via the Internet. In other
word, it is an optimal choice to purchase via the help
of Internet(这两个句子纠结了.应该是purchasing on line is an optimal choice.)-
            buying on line can save us a great deal of time and energy. Therefore, we may have more leisure
time to do other things we are interested in. It
will suffice to mention my own experience. Last month, I had to deal with a
science test. At that time, there was merely(pathetically)
one week left. And even more unfortunately, there were no related reference
books in hand and the bookshop in our city did not sell these books. I was so(不要这个so,直接一个I was baffled.更有力) baffled. All of sudden,
a thought that I can buy some books in the net shop came
up to my mind. Then, I searched several related books and ordered them
in a website. The next days, the books that I wanted were delivered. It only
took a day for me to wait for the books.
Finally, thanks to these books, I obtained a high score in my test. Thus, in
the next twenty years, more sorts of goods, I believe, will be sold in the
Internet and shopping through the Internet will be prevalent among people(这个句子应该反过来,As shopping
on line is rapidly becoming prevalent among people, I believe, in the next
twenty years, miscellaneous kinds of goods will be sold on line, hence more
time will be saved as leisure time.). Therefore, we will not dissipate much time on
the way of shopping and more spare time can be expected.

In addition, the robots,
as far as I am concerned, will emerge in our houses. Every morning, he(应该是it吧) will wake us up and prepare the meal for us. After
we go to work, the house may(will) be cleaned by
them. They will operate the washing machines to help us handle dirty clothes
simultaneously. Before we go back home, an abundant meal will be on the table.
Via the help of the robots, we will not have to stay in the house in to
cleaning and washing every evening. We have spare time to go out with our
friend to see the film or go shopping. In the future, we will not be so tired
as present and we can focus the attention on my work entirely. It will be a
comfortable life truly. (不错不错,进步很大)

In conclusion, the rapid
development of the society is leading to our life becoming much easy and
relaxed. Consequently, we can spend more time on our interests and
entertainments.