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A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force.

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楼主
发表于 2005-10-20 12:15:00 | 只看该作者

OG23的解释--有点糊涂

23. A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force.


(A)              numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase


(B)              numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent


(C)             numbers of women employed outside the home were raised by more than thirty-five percent


(D)             number of women employed outside the home increased by more than thirty-five percent


(E)              number of women employed outside the home was raised by more than a thirty-five percent increase


Because a count of women employed outside the home at any given time will be expressed by a single number, the use of the plural noun numbers in choices A, B, and C is illogical. In A, the phrase grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase is redundant and wordy, since the sense of increase is implicit in the verb grew. In C and E, the passive verb forms were raised and was raised are inappropriate because there is no identifi­able agent responsible for the raising of the number of women employed. In choice E, was raised by ... increase is redun­dant. Choice D, which presents the comparison logically and idiomatically, is the best answer.



看过以前的讨论稿,也知道a number of, the numbers of的用法,但是对于Because a count of women employed outside the home at any given time will be expressed by a single number这句话的理解还是想make sure 一下:


是不是因为这个句子需要表达的是在外工作的妇女的数量所以才用the number of呀?



since the sense of increase is implicit in the verb grew这句话又应该怎么理解呢?说实话,对increase, raise, grew的用法我真的不是很清楚。如果有nn帮着解释一下就谢谢了。

沙发
发表于 2005-10-20 12:35:00 | 只看该作者
正是如此啊,因为其他项的意思就有问题,numbers是复数名词,numbers of 和a number of 差不多,但大量的妇女grew 和 were raised 意思很奇怪,而数量increase 很合逻辑啊;此外increase, raise, grew都有增长增加的意思,与后面的名词increase连用是意思重复,ETS明令禁止的错误
板凳
发表于 2005-10-20 12:36:00 | 只看该作者

任何时候出门工作的妇女都只可能是一个确定的数字,不可能有两个数字,用单数。


since the sense of increase is implicit in the verb grew:因为GREW已经暗含乐INCREASE的意思,重复~~


INCREASE, RAISE ,GROW的用法请查字典,RAISE只能用做VT,后要接宾语,而其它两个可以用作VI也可以用作VT~~

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-20 22:51:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼上两位,解释的很清楚
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-20 22:57:00 | 只看该作者
那么如果答案B改正number of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent是不是就对了呢?

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发表于 2005-10-21 13:14:00 | 只看该作者
number 一般跟increase,grow 的很少见啊,而且表示增长了多少应该是要加介词by的
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