这是我AI029的第一段:
Recently there is a debate over whether people should concentrate on the specific tasks at hand or focus entirely on the result when working on an assignment. Different people may hold different views about these two factors, which most often than not interact with each other and make the issue more complicated. While there is no denying that one should spare no effort in working on the specific details of an assignment, I'd like to argue that bearing the result in mind plays an important role in the successful completion of the assignment.
问题1:
黄色部分是为了说明问题的complexity的,我的目的仅此而已,但是根据斑斑们的经验和推测,如果这样得话在第一段写了以后,会被认为是one consideration of the writing而应该在下文中elaborate么?
问题2:
类似问题1,绿色部分我的意图是我的立论的前提,也就是,“在承认我们不能放松花在具体事务上的真功夫的前提下,我认为脑中有目标会对帮助我们成功完成任务。”但是,我的下文就是围绕后半句,也就是目标的role来展开的,分了老八股三段:二段立论,一段考虑反对者意见,再也“没谈不能放松具体的作业”(因为这不是此issue的争论关键)。但是第一段放上这一句会不会被认为是consideration之一呢?
罗里八索写了这么多,还说简短的问题。。。。shy一个。。。
谢谢不吝赐教~
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