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107. While it costs about the same to run nuclear plants as other types of power plants, it is the fixed costs that stem from building nuclear plants that makes it more expensive for them to generate electricity. (A) While it costs about the same to run nuclear plants as other types of power plants, it is the fixed costs that stem from building nuclear plants thatmakesit more expensive for them to generate electricity. (B) While the cost of running nuclear plants is about the same as for other types of power plants, the fixed costs that stem from building nuclear plants make the electricity they generate more expensive. (C) Even though it costs about the same to run nuclear plants as for other types of power plants, it is the fixed costs that stem from building nuclear plants thatmakes the electricity they generate more expensive. (D) It costs about the same to run nuclear plants as for other types of power plants, whereas the electricity they generate is more expensive, stemming from the fixed costs of building nuclear plants. (E) The cost of running nuclear plants is about the same as other types of power plants, but the electricity they generate is made more expensive because of the fixed costs stemming from building nuclear plants.
OG的答案解释中特别强调那个for的必要性，但也没说特别明白。for的位置已粗体红色标出。它是和哪个动词搭配，或者说是表示什么？我至今仍觉得这个for特别多余
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Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of The Messenger were two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader. (A) Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of The Messenger were two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader. (B) Published in Harlem, two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, were the owner and editor of The Messenger. (C) Published in Harlem, The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and Chandler Owen. (D) The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and published in Harlem. (E) The owner and editor being two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, The Messenger was published in Harlem.
OG的答案中说D项的从句（已粗体红色标出）没有明确的先行词。它的先行词不是A. Philip Randolph？如果说可能有歧义的话，后面的代词his也明确了who不可能指代C.Owen和A.P.Randolph两个人啊
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Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk o heart disease. (A)they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease (B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again (C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again (D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again (E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again
答案说E项的in a 1991 report放的位置不对，求问哪里不对了，我主观上感觉A项的类似表达更别扭……
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Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while inGermany it is just over 33 percent.
(A) while in Germany it is just over 33 percent (B) compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent (C)whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany (D) whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany (E) compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent
这题我做的时候已经判断出来答案是在C、D之间了，于是比较了一下whereas前后的平行程度，果断选了错误的D……
答案说是the破坏了D这个答案，可是恕我眼拙，没看出来它捅什么娄子了……
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Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year—they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises—heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
(A) Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year (B) Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins (C) Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year (D) Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins (E) Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
好吧，这题我做的时候首先排的就是cousins紧接they的B、D、E，理由是我以为often green and striped从上下文来看是说的heirloom，可这个they离的cousins那么近，不会出修饰错误么……我是哪里想错了
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Most efforts to combat such mosquito-borne diseases like malaria and dengue have focused either on the vaccination of humans or on exterminating mosquitoes with pesticides. (A) like malaria and dengue have focused either onthe vaccination of humans or on exterminating (B) like malaria and dengue have focused either on vaccinating of humans or on the extermination of (C) as malaria and dengue have focused on either vaccinating humans or on exterminating (D) as malaria and dengue have focused on either vaccinating of humans or on extermination of (E)as malaria and dengue have focused on either vaccinating humans or exterminating 这题没看错的话C和E只差一个on是吧……
所以我果断选了那个错误的E……
话说这种平行结构的重复部分on不是可写出来可省略么……
以上，感谢各位
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话说复习到现在，在下很迷茫，我把OG140题每10题分了一组，前几组的时候正确率还都在十中七八，到了第8组左右就开始稳定到十中四。其间我也想过办法，也来论坛看了些帖子，错题的答案也都认真看，也找了曼哈顿的讲解来看，为了语法我还把同时刷的逻辑给停了。可是不仅没有效果，到最后一组的时候十题干脆只对了两题，简直和啥也不会靠那20%的概率瞎蒙等效。前辈们看我上面的问题也应该能感觉出来，我觉得我现在就是在一本正经地胡说八道，每道题都错得很有理由的样子，把正确答案首先排除了。我也不知道下一步要做什么了，5月20日考试，应该说还有些时间，可是我不知道还要这样挣扎多久，我还要练逻辑阅读写作，后期还要练速度……
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