Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntingtor (Dickinson were written over a period begining a few years before Susan's marraiage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering) her letters to anyone else. A选项为什么不对呢？  -- by 会员 小脸绯红 (2012/11/9 21:10:56)
ron的解释：
quote：
"the phrase in question, "outnumbering ...", is NOT, in any way whatsoever, a "(direct/indirect) result" of the time period over which the letters were written. these are two completely independent and unrelated observations about the letters, and so they can't be placed into the sort of construction that appears in choice (a). this is thus not a grammatical problem so much as a problem of clarity, but it's still a problem.
examples:
my brother, who ate bagel bites for breakfast every single day of his high school career, graduated in 1994. --> correct; his eating bagel bites had no impact on his graduation date.
my brother ate bagel bites for breakfast every single day of his high school career, graduating in 1994. --> incorrect; these are two unrelated observations, but this construction erroneously implies some sort of relationship." | 
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发表于 2012-11-9 21:10:56
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