关于一道prep的语法题~~~的分析~~~~~求指点~~~

bob9603 · 发表于 2012-7-23 19:47:58

More than 300 riversdrain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of theworld's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.

(A) More than 300 rivers drain intoSiberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, morethan all the North American Great Lakes combined.

(B) With 20 percent of the world'sfresh water, that is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined,Siberia's Lake Baikal hasmore than 300 rivers that drain into it.

(C) Siberia's Lake Baikal, withmore than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh waterthan all that of the North American Great Lakes combined, 20 percent.

(D) While more than 300 riversdrain into it, Siberia's Lake Baikal holds 20 percent of the world's freshwater, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.

(E) More than all the NorthAmerican Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 riversdraining into it, holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.

这题小菜试着分析一下，虽然能选对，但总觉得遗漏的地方太多，麻烦nn指点~~~

A，正确~ 主干清晰：300 rivers drain into SLB；然后有一个非限定性从句修饰：SLB（因为holds 所以是which指代的肯定是单数，所以指代SLB无歧义）；后面more than 比较对象清晰：300 rivers drain 和 the North American Great Lakes combined，且逻辑意思合理，都是关于“水聚集的问题”~

B，开头with引导的这个东东在原句中是非限定性修饰SLB，而在这里变成了独立主格表伴随，显然是错的。（ps：通俗一点说，难道这两个湖不比较，20%这个事实就不在了吗？？）；这里的that小菜不知道有什么问题，因为那个不是小菜看这题的split；combined逗号后面的东西，一看就是就不如A中的简洁，明明能用简单的svo说话，却非要s和o换位，同时还用that解释，太wordy了~

C，看C的第一眼就让我想起og里面的sc 111，it 做了holds的主语，悬挂了SLB，这太错了；此外，重中之重是原句的重点：svo，在这里竟然变成了一个夹心修饰，这也太错了，句子focus的都不一样，改变原意了（这又让我想起了sc 111）

D，这题的重心：SLB holds 20 bababa~重心不对，竟然把一个非限定性从句的内容变成了重点，太错了；而且还用while，给人的感觉是300 rivers汇入的同时，SLB还拥有bababa，原句压根就没有这种感觉；不过小菜倒认为这类的“into it”的it，向后指代SLB到没什么问题

E，还是句子重心的问题：SLB holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.这和原句的重心不一致，且这东西是非限定性从句里面的，这就更不对了。

大概就是这样，其实小菜想强调的一点就是句子重心~

其实这题只要提取原句的重心，然后就可以秒杀BCDE：

我写出来，明显的对比一下：

A，300 rivers drain into SLBB，SLB has 300 rivers that drain it (wordy)
C， it holds the world's fresh water (少SLB)
D，SLB holds 20 percent of the world's freshwater（含非限）
E, SLB holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water（含非限）

好吧，小菜写完了，求nn指点哈~~

bob9603 · 发表于 2012-7-23 19:48:16

jeffery2541 · 发表于 2012-7-23 20:52:18

好~~~看懂啦~~~

tzhou7 · 发表于 2013-2-16 22:36:21

这里的more than 修饰的应该是20 percent of the world's fresh water吧？

tzhou7 · 发表于 2013-2-16 22:38:13

比较对象是Siberia's Lake Baikal和all the North American Great Lakes

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