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snowgirl003

12月份考T，看过德克老师批改的作文，受益匪浅，我的第一篇处女作，是2005年12月16日的题目，主要说年青人是否应该为为来做计划，文中很多借鉴了别人的文章，费了好长时间才写好的，麻烦德克老师指点，不胜感激！ 

I remember when I first went to college, I planed carefully when to register for my new courses, see my professor, pay my tuition fees, talk to other students. As a result when I finished doing all of these, some of my classmates who did not plan at all were still busy doing one or two of them.
                A good plan is a good beginning, it is useful for all of us to have a clear goal, use time efficiently, and decrease unexpected things will happen. So arranging everything in advance is the key avenue to our success in the future.

A careful plan help you make a clearly aim, which motivates you to learn more. The god gives everybody 24 hours a day, no one does not have a little more time or less. Valuing this time and Arranging all things you should do one day , your goal motivats you to put forward and surprisingly, you realise that you are able to do so many work in the limited time. Just as the example I have mentioned above, I arranged everything I should finish in one day when I first went to college. At the time of having registered for new courses, my goal told me I should see my professor right now. I didn’ t  wast time on thinking what I did next. I saved a lot of time and accomplished all things in one day.

On the other hand, we will waste a lot of time if we do not have a careful plan. my grandma spends most of her time sitting in the porch not doing much. But she always complains that she has so little time but so many things to do. I think it is because she spends no time planning for her many things.

To such two important reason, I deem that making a careful plan when people are still young is beneficial to one’s future.

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snowgirl003

哪位高手老师指点一下啊?不胜感激!