请问这几个句子是对的吗？

iimoon

科学技术的发展使人们能够轻松的学习知识了。

1 It is science being developed that people can extraodinarily obtain knowledge easily.

2 With being developed science, people can study knowledge easily.

3 The more developed science, the more easily people……

4 Because of being developed science……

还望高人指点，还有什么说法吗？？我写作很不好，怎么准备写作啊？你们的作文写完了后怎么修改啊，我自己的水平很不好，写得乱七八糟的，自己也改不出，看不出自己的错。你们一般怎么做的啊？？、谢谢

Joypan

这几个句子貌似都不对吧？