Wharton 申请者的长期目标怎么都差不多那！

yagengasdf

在BW和vault上看了两天的范文，加起来有十几篇文章了，也就是十几个被wharton成功录取的人，百分之九十的人的长期目标都是自己开公司。是不是wharton比较喜欢把长期目标定位为自己创业的人。而且我看到的中国的申请者都是要创业的。不是商学院要diversity吗，这个东西在最重要的事情上怎么就不diversify了呢？

疑惑中！

希望wharton的同学们给与答复！

谢谢！

eternalwind

建议你多看几篇ESSAY

明显不是这么回事

yagengasdf

我其实是比较好奇，但是既然eternalwind要是这样说的话，我就只能摘抄出我看过的10篇里面的东西了。其实市面上的wharton的sample essay一共也没多少篇，我就是觉得有点奇怪罢了。不是说创业不好。我的意思是这个long term goal 写的人确实是比较多，这说不说明wharton喜欢这方面的人？

becoming a well-rounded leader capable of owning my business and growing it into one of Fortune 500 companies is my ultimate career goals.

I want to one day operate my own business where my unique background and familiarity with both Asia and the U.S. could provide distinct advantages. This realization built upon what I had learned about myself after Wharton's rejection last year, a truly humbling experience.

Having developed a strong personal code of business ethics, I envision making my mark as an entrepreneur by creating a company that facilitates trustworthy relationships between East and West and inspires others with its ethics.

In the long-term, I plan to establish my own consulting company whose mission will be to contribute to the economic development of Europe through both the assessment of multinational companies looking to invest in Western Europe and the redefinition/restructuring of the business operations of companies already in Europe which face the threat of delocalization.

My long-term career goal is to create my own consulting firm to help Moroccan entrepreneurs face these challenges.

In the longer term, I feel very implicated in the economic development of the Basque country, as my family comes from that region. By using my experience as a venture capitalist, I plan to create a venture capital and consulting firm that will provide pan-European-focused Basque companies with both financing and operational support.

Building a socially conscious travel business in China is my long term goal.

My aspiration is to set up and manage my own health-care organization, catered especially for the underserved communities in my country.

" You want to build a tea beverage brand to beat Coca-Cola pepsi in China; are you kidding?"

请指点！

谢谢！

yagengasdf

不好意思，排版有问题， 我一共看得不多，一共10个人被wharton录取的，但是有9个都是怎么说：

1：becoming a well-rounded leader capable of owning my business and growing it into one of Fortune 500 companies is my ultimate career goals.

2：I want to one day operate my own business where my unique background and familiarity with both Asia and the U.S. could provide distinct advantages. This realization built upon what I had learned about myself after Wharton's rejection last year, a truly humbling experience.

3：Having developed a strong personal code of business ethics, I envision making my mark as an entrepreneur by creating a company that facilitates trustworthy relationships between East and West and inspires others with its ethics.

4：In the long-term, I plan to establish my own consulting company whose mission will be to contribute to the economic development of Europe through both the assessment of multinational companies looking to invest in Western Europe and the redefinition/restructuring of the business operations of companies already in Europe which face the threat of delocalization.

5：My long-term career goal is to create my own consulting firm to help Moroccan entrepreneurs face these challenges.

6：In the longer term, I feel very implicated in the economic development of the Basque country, as my family comes from that region. By using my experience as a venture capitalist, I plan to create a venture capital and consulting firm that will provide pan-European-focused Basque companies with both financing and operational support.

7：Building a socially conscious travel business in China is my long term goal.

8：My aspiration is to set up and manage my own health-care organization, catered especially for the underserved communities in my country.

9：" You want to build a tea beverage brand to beat Coca-Cola pepsi in China; are you kidding?"

谢谢

highflyer

In my personal opinion:-

1) Entrepreneurship in itself is diverse. In the 9 samples, u can find 9 areas in which those people want to build up their career.

2) Diversity did not mean difference in everything. For example, everybody want to get into biz world upon graduation. U cannot say it is too homogeneous as inside biz, there are various sectors.

3) Don't think everybody's long-term goal is entrepreneur.

  

cicilla

不管你将来想干吗，你能说服别人你有能力做到，而且的确你是一直努力朝这个方向努力的就可以了。没有必要去想哪个学校喜欢将来想做什么的人。按照你的逻辑，是不是申请HBS你就要说做CEO,申请Kellogg你就要说做Marketing Director，申请Columbia, Chicago就要说做CFO?

yagengasdf

多谢各位的解释，但是我觉得还是没有回答我的问题：

我的问题其实很简单，比如像cicilla说的，HBS就是喜欢申请者要有很大的领导才能，这就是这个学校所想看到的标准的申请者，我的问题是wharton比较想看到的是不是长期目标是创业的申请者，如果是的话，那么可能这个学校不适合我，我是在选校过程中，所以疑问会多一点。

所以回答我的问题也应该很简单，是或者不是。

多谢指教！

eternalwind

拜托多找几本ESSAY书，看个一百多篇ESSAY再来这里发表评论

看了几篇VAULT和BUSINESSWEEK的东东就觉得自己成专家了

至于吗

yagengasdf

我其实不想跟谁来争什么问题，就是想澄清这个问题。

eternalwind，你说说你看得是那些书可以吗，也让我来看看，很大的可能是我没有看全，但是我已经尽我的努力找了，近几年的wharton的essay sample确实我就找到20篇不到关于long term goal, short term goal的。

我觉得这个论坛的最重要的目的是解惑答疑，并不是争端是非。

谢谢回答！

promising

eternalwind火气很大的说.