a的earlier in Mayor Delmont’s tenure,我觉得这个in有问题,如果是in,则无法对原文支持
如果是than,我觉得可以接受
另外,c中的the jobs that were lost in the city under Delmont’s leadership是可以视为一个加强的吧
我认为,既然是这个市长在位时创造的,那这些工作机会又被消灭掉,这些Mayor Delmont’s critics complain about the jobs that were lost in the city under Delmont’s leadership.当然就不对咯。对于这个城市总体来说,工作机会还是没有少的嘛,从一个方面是可以算做加强吧