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作者: Vanyazhao 时间: 2015-4-16 21:28
标题: OG答案理解不能QAQ 求助！
OG12一道语法题求问？
[size=10.000000pt]Rising inventories, when unaccompaniedcorrespondingly by increases in sales, can leadto production cutbacks that would hampereconomic growth.
(A)  when unaccompanied correspondingly byincreases in sales, can lead
(B)  when not accompanied by correspondingincreases in sales, possibly leads
(C)  when they were unaccompanied bycorresponding sales increases, can lead
(D)  if not accompanied by correspondinglyincreased sales, possibly leads
(E)  if not accompanied by corresponding increasesin sales, can lead
Diction; Agreement
  The modifying phrase when ... sales is needlesslydiðcult to understand. The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using theadjective corresponding to modify increases in salesmakes the intended meaning clearer. Unaccompaniedis not wrong but not accompanied more effectivelyexpresses the intended negation.




问题：12. 为什么官方答案说 correspondingly 不明确？看到awkward总心塞到不能。。。以及为什么when。。。。sales 一句difficult understand？
求讨论求意见求指导嘤嘤。。。大谢！

作者: Vanyazhao 时间: 2015-4-16 22:12
另外还有一题
39. In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to Queen Catherine annulled so as to marry Anne Boleyn.
(A) so as to marry
(B) and so could be married to
(C) to be married to
(D) so that he could marry
(E) in order that he would marry
看C答案
C the infinitive here should be preceded by a conjunction (in order); to marry is preferable to the wordier to be married to.
请问这里一定要in order 引导么

作者: clylize 时间: 2015-4-17 23:27
第一题 a unaccompanied用法不如not accompanied好然后when没有if好 OG已经写得很清楚了哈你再仔细看看OG

作者: lindberghya 时间: 2015-4-17 23:48
换个角度会不会好一点？
A：unaccompanied < not accompanied；correspondingly 只能修饰unaccompanied，意思明显重复了
B：possibly改变句子意思；leads 主谓不一致
C：unaccompanied < not accompanied；were改变句子时态；increases in sth.
D: orrespondingly 只能修饰unaccompanied，意思明显重复了;possibly改变句子意思；leads 主谓不一致
E: not accompanied--正确，corresponding increases --修饰正确，increases in sth --语法正确， can lead主谓一致且没改变原句意思 --正确

作者: lindberghya 时间: 2015-4-17 23:58

Vanyazhao 发表于 2015-4-16 22:12
另外还有一题
39. In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to Queen Catherine annulled so ...

第39题很坏，有个很妖的点在这里
1. to 不一定要用in order 引导，这个是无疑的
2. 这里你想到用to 说明你知道是表达目的的意思，而且你知道是 King Henry 要marry Anne Boleyn。但是，(in order) to 必须直接或者非常靠近主语才行，否则会有歧义，尤其是在主语和（in order ）to之间还多了个Queen Catherine。而在表达目的状语的时候，so that不但没有改变意思，而且可以帮助明确主语，使得读句子的人可以毫不费力的定位marry的主语是King Henry。因此，D要优于C。
SC考得是更好的句子，不是正确就可以的。。。

作者: Vanyazhao 时间: 2015-5-5 00:38
前一阵因为一些个人原因没有能刷CD，在这里谢谢楼上各位，很有帮助！

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