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标题: 作文魔板5.5 [打印本页]

作者: xiaojie83    时间: 2005-3-10 03:58
标题: 作文魔板5.5

昨天才拿到作文成绩,比想象中好一点5.5。 稍微安抚了我被ETS伤痛的心灵(半年前GRE AWA的3.5)。


害怕重蹈GRE的魔板覆辙,所以这次的魔板使自己写的,不过没有什么规范,随性所致,仅供大家参考。希望能给和我一样对作文有心理障碍的朋友一点信心。


issue:


         As every coin has two sides, there are always conflicts between … On this issue, some people claim that .. Because of …. On the contrary, other people prefer…. To choose A or B is always a dilemma to public. As far as I am concerned, I agree with A in several aspects.


         Firstly, any discussion about the issue would inevitably involve the … of the two… On the one hand, A ..; On the other hand, B… Consequently,…


         C is, however, only one of the factors that influence my preference on A. Another significant one is that…, A.. B, in contrast, …For example, …


         Moreoversome people may neglect the fact that … To understand the truth, it is also important to


         Admittedly, B also has a couple of merits, but it suffers from the disadvantage that.. Generally speaking, taking into account, its advantage outweigh its shortcomings, and that is why I choose A.


         To sum up, taking into account all these factors discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that…



作者: xiaojie83    时间: 2005-3-10 04:02
标题: 补充一点

忘记补充一点:一定要留3分钟检查拼写,从前我不知道这点所以觉得写得不错最后分数还很难看。这次toefl和gmat发挥不好倒都是5.5让我确信只要拼写结构够好,内容反而不算那么重要。只适用于机考,个人意见。


作者: beautywawa    时间: 2005-3-10 08:37
謝謝分享唷!!!




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