标题: 求解答！！！谢谢 [打印本页] 作者: Ginnysummer 时间: 2015-3-6 16:59 标题: 求解答！！！谢谢 GWD31-Q9
As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
A.As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was
B.As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been
C.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was
D.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was
E.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been.
一道GWD的题目。正确答案D。也知道B.C.E.为什么错了，但是A的错误点始终不明白，度娘的解释和考GMAT网的解释都觉得不充分，求大牛解答A为什么错误呀！！感谢感谢！！！作者: Ginnysummer 时间: 2015-3-6 17:01
有解释说 A 选项的 his 向前找不到指代， 但是 among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was...本来就是倒装啊， 正确语序： C S-S was among the most .... of his time. 这样his 不就能找到指代了吗作者: Cl109790230 时间: 2015-3-7 12:13
我觉得这种说一个人职务，然后说事迹的，然后说做了什么的，最核心的动词被放在最后一个分句，前面都是修饰可以用定从分词什么的，最后的核心动词肯定要用动词形式的。而且 职务，头衔+人名，多常用的一个搭配，不用加as作者: 酷玩小明 时间: 2015-3-8 11:52
A中主语前的修饰语太多啦~~~作者: yuanzhenh 时间: 2015-3-11 14:32
A，主谓不全，简化一下是
As a pianist was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921)，即便倒装也不需要 as
As a pianist, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) 这样看的话， as 离主语太远，够不上合理的修饰