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作者: 闪电噜噜 时间: 2015-1-25 23:54
标题: 提问大全35题<比较结构>
搜索了论坛里现有的答案，没有让我觉得有说服力的，也从国外论坛搜索了一下，都是各执己见；求NN指点
贴题：
35.According to a panel of health officials, there has been a great deal of confusion in the medical profession about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to health.
(A) about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to
(B) with respect to obesity being a biological disorder posing serious health risks or if it is related more to appearance than
(C) over whether or not obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than to
(D) about obesity and if it is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition related to appearance more than to
(E) concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition related to appearance more than
the key:A
A：五个选项全读下来可以理解A正确，但是第一眼会觉得biological disorder和condition 逻辑上不对称（并不是，每个都是这么对应的）
D：疑问点是，是否篡改了句意呢变成了confusion about obesity 感觉语义上扩大了confusion的范围；而且if在G中只有如果的意思，此处应为whether。所以错？
E：我不觉得concerning错，然后还有我觉得it is 是可有可无，因为去掉也没歧义啦，最重要一点我看到有人讲E错是因为应该是to health，可是我觉得没必要加to啊，因为related to 是idiom，然后比较的不是appearance more than （related to）health，就是我认为这里的related to 是可省略的

求指教

作者: 闪电噜噜 时间: 2015-1-25 23:55
求不沉，望28考试前有李菊福的解答><

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2015-1-26 08:41
针对LZ对E选项的理解，这里说一下，首先，concerning肯定是不对，因为这样concerning直接作为定语修饰the medical profession 逻辑意思发生根本错误，另外，more than不对，因为这样用意味着只肯定appearance而否定了health.这样又扭曲了原来的意思，真正原来的意思应该是to appearance 和 to health 都相关，但to appearance更密切些。

作者: 闪电噜噜 时间: 2015-1-26 08:59

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2015-1-26 08:41
针对LZ对E选项的理解，这里说一下，首先，concerning肯定是不对，因为这样concerning直接作为定语修饰the m ...

谢谢楼上的解答，我觉得挺有道理的><

作者: 闪电噜噜 时间: 2015-1-26 09:03

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2015-1-26 08:41
针对LZ对E选项的理解，这里说一下，首先，concerning肯定是不对，因为这样concerning直接作为定语修饰the m ...

另外有个疑问，我之前以为现在分词只有作伴随才用考虑动作的发出者，这样的话其实是做后置定语；那就是只有有现在分词作修饰成分出现都要考虑他和逻辑主语之间是否存在关系么？

作者: ukyo2003 时间: 2015-1-26 19:20
我的分析

搜索了论坛里现有的答案，没有让我觉得有说服力的，也从国外论坛搜索了一下，都是各执己见；求NN指点
贴题：
35.According to a panel of health officials, there has been a great deal of confusion in the medical profession about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to health.

(A) about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to (正确，more 修饰related to非常清楚的表示是对比related程度的)
(B) with respect to obesity being a biological disorder posing serious health risks or if it is related more to appearance than (or 前后结构不对称；是否应该用whether而不是if)
(C) over whether or not obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than to (whether or not, or永远错)
(D) about obesity and if it is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition related to appearance more than to (是否应该用whether而不是if)
(E) concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition related to appearance more than (错误1- 不简洁，it is 我觉得可以省略；错误2，more than导致意思不单一，这里很多这样的错误：既可以理解为-- it (obesity) is a condition related to appearance more than health is a condition related to appearance，也可以理解为it is a condition more related to appreance than related to health；这里需要to health才能避免不歧义)

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2015-1-27 07:34

闪电噜噜发表于 2015-1-26 09:03
另外有个疑问，我之前以为现在分词只有作伴随才用考虑动作的发出者，这样的话其实是做后置定语；那就是只 ...

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