627。 Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he once turned a broken goblet into a dinner bell and a cake mold into a lamp.
(A) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he
(B) Alexander Calder, for whom old pieces of junk was often made into sculpture, believed in recycling at home and
(C) A believer in recycling at home, sculptor Alexander Calder often made use for old pieces of junk in his art; he
(D) Alexander Calder, for whom sculpture was often made from old pieces of junk, also believed in recycling at home, for example, he（E）
(E) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art, also believed in recycling at home; he
b,d错在哪里呢?believe的主语是什么？
1。B和D用了不必要的被动语态
2。"for whom old pieces of junk was often made into sculpture"，unidiomatic。补全看："Old pieces of junk was often made into sculpture for Alexander Calder"，不通，用"by whom..."还好点。
3。B 和 D丢了Sculptor和in his art, lose information
4。D 选项，for example前应该是句号。
believed的主语是Calder
请问A 错 是因为E比较简洁吗 因为also 单独就可以当连接词
To Joycewin：
分号分隔两个独立的句子，也就是说，分号前应该是一个完整的句子，但是A缺失成分，没有完成句子。
Sculptor Alexander Calder（主语）, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home（主语的修饰成分）缺少谓语;
这是很典型的错误。
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