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标题: 关于while doing,仔细研读官方题目以及解析后疑问,求小伙伴们共同探讨 [打印本页]
作者: 子芸儿chu 时间: 2014-12-3 00:17
标题: 关于while doing,仔细研读官方题目以及解析后疑问,求小伙伴们共同探讨
关于while doing
我不明白的是为什么PREP2012 的20题E的while doing是错误的,Prep的官方解释是while willing 是一个不完整的结构,他到底哪里不完整了?while 是可以省略主语的吗?
但我又找到后面的两句OG13-134,PREP是对的。很奇怪!
求解答!!!
Prep2012-20
错误选项E:Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of theiranalytical skills while willing toadmit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.
错误原因:E. Have a disinclination iswordy (the verb disinclined is preferred) and, when followed by while willing, creates an incompleteconstruction
OG13-134
正确句子:Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based onstudies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job,and fatigue among shift workers whileraising production efficiency in various industries.
Prep:
正确句子:A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold acombination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denouncebig government, saying government is doing too much and has become toopowerful, while at the same timesupporting many specific government programs for health care, education,and the environment.
作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2014-12-3 09:15
LZ,只能简单谈一下。
1句,不能简单的从语法上区分它的错误,只能结合逻辑意思来分析,这句强调的是一种对比,意思是说人们一面承认自己技术不行,但另一方面否认自己分析能力差。所以E选项没有体现这种对比关系,更像是伴随状语表结果,那与句意不合了,所以在这种对比关系比较强的句子中while前后最好跟完整从句。
2句,这句中raising作状语表示一种结果,所以这么用是可以的(对比一下其他选项就知道这个答案也只是无奈的选择)。
3句,这里就是和saying 的并列,很简单。
作者: 子芸儿chu 时间: 2014-12-3 22:24
kiwifoodtown 发表于 2014-12-3 09:15
LZ,只能简单谈一下。
1句,不能简单的从语法上区分它的错误,只能结合逻辑意思来分析,这句强调的是一种对 ...
谢谢你的解答,有一点理解了,但是第三句不是和saying 并列呢,supporting是和denounce 对应,一个支持有一个反对吧。所以这里,while doing是省略了主语?
作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2014-12-4 08:46
子芸儿chu 发表于 2014-12-3 22:24
谢谢你的解答,有一点理解了,但是第三句不是和saying 并列呢,supporting是和denounce 对应,一个支持有 ...
你说的对,我没有看清楚,的确不是和saying并列,这里只是引导supporting作状语。
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