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标题: 【口语小分队】Emily的口语楼 [打印本页]

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-9-30 23:10
标题: 【口语小分队】Emily的口语楼
晚加入了几天自己默默把TPO 1 2 补上~~~

这里是9-30 TPO3 TASK 3456的作业~ 黄金口语 3、4

感冒速速好起来！！！声音听着好别扭！~ 说话也不利落大家注意身体！！~

3. Describe the most important decision that you made in your life.

Personally, the most important decision that I have made in my life is to participate in the student union when I was in the university.

First, my personality has changed a lot. Previously, I was an introverted and shy girl, but after I joined the student union, I was very active in various activities and took great pleasure in making new friends. My enthusiastic workmates affected me a lot, and I unconsciously became an outgoing girl like them.

Second, I met my best friend Amy, when we organized the Christmas Party together. We shared the feeling of delight and depression simultaneously. [,sɪml'teɪnɪəslɪ] Sometimes we were scolded by leaders or teachers, but we consoled each other and soon started to move on. Our relationship was cultivated in the mutual encouragement and concern.

4. Do you think the high school should teach music and art as other basic science?

Music and art should be the vital component of school curriculum.

To study music is to study the basics. For example, when I leaned the play of Shakespeare, I also studied his creation background, that is to say, the European Renaissance Period. Furthermore, I compared his writing styles with other celebrities such as Boccaccio [bəu'ka:tʃiəu]. Not only did I supplement the knowledge of European History, but also aroused the interest of literature via learning music and art.

In addition, music, like reading, writing and speaking, conveys thoughts, ideas and feelings. It also provides an avenue for developing self-expression and creativity.

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-1 10:36
啦啦啦自己默默补上~~~ 黄金口语&TPO1

1.说出你认为对你最有用的一本书，并解释原因。

The most important book for me is The Old Man and The Sea.
First, the protagonist [prə'tæɡənɪst], Santiago, [,sænti:'eiɡəu], tells me never surrender to my opponent. Santiago is an aging fisherman who struggles with a giant marlin far out in the Gulf Stream. Though he failed eventually, his spirit of never giving up touched me.

Second, the famous saying from Santiago inspired me a lot----A man can be destroyed but not defeated. Last year I only got 600 in my GMAT examination, and felt frustrated. But when I read the book again, I cheered up and threw away all the depression. At last, with the encouragement from the book, I got 700 in the second GMAT exam.

2. 电视对于现代社会有正面作用还是负面作用，选择其中之一并解释原因。

Personally, I think television has more positive effects towards the modern society than its negative sides.
First, from the news broadcasting in the television, we can know what is happening in the outside world without stepping out home. We can learn the latest scientific discovery and research from the program Discovery.

Second, watching television is a good way to release exhaust and burden, because there are various appealing TV series such as the Big Bang Theory, Friends, and Modern Family. After watching those amusing TV series, I can refresh my mind and recharge the battery. Also, I enjoy sharing the feeling with families, which adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-1 23:38
10-1 TPO TASK2 3456

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-2 23:51
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5. 空闲时间用来做什么?

Personally, in my spare time, I prefer to go to a small town where my grandparents live with charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.

Furthermore, my grandparents and I enjoy going to some restaurants offering the best seafood such as lobsters and tuna fish. I really cherish the time with my well-beloved grandparents. Although I am immersed with workloads every day, after a short time relaxing, I could refresh my mind and recharge the battery.

6. 打手机该不该在一些地方禁止？

I strongly agree that the use of a mobile phone should be forbidden in some places, such as library and airplanes.

First, the most common reason for people going to a library is to find a silent environment to read without interruption. But if you receive a phone call in the library or just send out messages, the mobile phone will ring. Though people have personal right to use their mobile phone, the others are not supposed to be involved in the unnecessary disturbance.

Another place is airplane. As we all know that it is very dangerous to have a phone call during the flight. Using mobile phones may causes interference between the signals. As a result, passengers’ safety cannot be guaranteed.

作者: sclovexj 时间: 2014-10-3 00:22
天你的速度真的太快了
我晚上回来，把录音弄好了一半，明天上传余下的

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-3 09:05

sclovexj 发表于 2014-10-3 00:22
天你的速度真的太快了
我晚上回来，把录音弄好了一半，明天上传余下的

说快了能听懂么.... 这个比较关键......

作者: sclovexj 时间: 2014-10-3 10:05

说的时候就是有点点rush，流利程度和组织结构，句法用词很好。
第二次修改，其他的需要如何来评价？

作者: sclovexj 时间: 2014-10-3 10:06

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-3 09:05
说快了能听懂么.... 这个比较关键......

我的意思是你上传的速度快，
口语速度是rush的向前，因为很清晰所以都能听懂，

作者: benhuang1991 时间: 2014-10-4 03:54
Reply: Task Oct 1st TPO 2-3\4\5\6
综合来讲，水平很好，内容齐全结构清晰
但是还有一些小小的问题，如下：
1. 存在以下小的语法错误，我想这是因为紧张的缘故
2. 语句有些时候有些不连贯，当然听声音有可能是感冒或者其他缘故
3. 我不太确定有些语句ETS是否能听懂，因为文化背景的问题，以及我们第一语言的差异性导致有些语句在意思表达上是直接由中文翻译英文而成的，所以在表达上也许存在一些问题。
以上就是我的评价，只能提供一些非官方的言论，还望包含。

作者: sclovexj 时间: 2014-10-4 10:41

benhuang1991 发表于 2014-10-4 03:54
Reply: Task Oct 1st TPO 2-3\4\5\6
综合来讲，水平很好，内容齐全结构清晰
但是还有一些小小的问题，如下 ...

@benhuang1991,就是比如说我们怎么样给对方评价，需要注重那些细节呢？以提高更好，或是相互提高

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-5 09:41
TPO5 TASK 3456

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-5 09:45
TPO6 TASK 3456

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-5 11:10
TPO7 TASK 3456

作者: angla 时间: 2014-10-5 12:29

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-2 23:51
10-2 TPO 4 TASK 3456

5. 空闲时间用来做什么?

冏，你说得好快啊。。。。第一遍都没听懂。。。。

作者: angla 时间: 2014-10-5 12:50

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-2 23:51
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5. 空闲时间用来做什么?

10.2日作业修改意见

TPO4 task3
guanrantee individual access to。。。我觉得用得挺好的
hire，的发音 ai。。你发的hi
price have come down，单数

task4
内容稍微不太全
1、开头句缺乏整段的概括性语句，the lecture is talking about the relationship between verbal and nonverbal。你直接说nonverbal会加强。。。略显突兀
2、每一个例子后面缺乏一个此例如何证明这个理论的句子。比如，因为professor的gesture与verbal一致，所以他欢迎uncle的message得到加强。反之女儿的例子也是。

3.4 很完美，没问题

黄金5，信息量很大。充分显示了楼主的语言能力。但例子好像跟无老师的例子比较雷同，谨防与他人重复

作者: angla 时间: 2014-10-5 12:51
10.3 跟我们做的不一样哈。后面的没法改了。。。

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-5 23:15

7. 描述一件自己印象深刻的celebration或者moment。

The most impressive moment for me is my eighteen-year-old birthday party. My birthday was on Monday, whenI woke up in the dormitory, everyone has hurried to the classroom withoutsaying any blessings. Feeling extremely disappointed, I ate the breakfast andwent to the library alone. It seemed that everyone forgot my birthday. When Ireturned to the dorm in the evening with a broken heart, suddenly the light wasturned off and colorful bulbs started shining! With a birthday cake presentedand the birthday song played, my roommates said loudly and excitedly, “Happybirthday EMILY! We do love u!” Immediately, I burst out of tears. Then theyshowed the presents for me, a red lipstick, a new notebook, and a lovely toybear. I felt so touched and that was the most unforgettable moment for me.

8. Whichone acts more influence on you newspaper, TV or teachers?

I definitely thinkthat it is TV that influences me most.

First, from the newsbroadcasting in the television, we can know what is happening in the outsideworld without stepping out home. We can learn the latest scientific discoveryand research from the program Discovery and TED. Both newspaper and teachercannot provide that latest information.

Second, watchingtelevision is a good way to release exhaust and burden, because there arevarious appealing TV series such as the Big Bang Theory, Friends, and ModernFamily. After watching those amusing TV series, I can refresh my mind andrecharge the battery. Also, I enjoy sharing the feeling with families, whichadds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

作者: daisy333 时间: 2014-10-6 16:32

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-5 23:15
7. 描述一件自己印象深刻的celebration或者moment。The most impressive moment for me is my eighteen-y ...

12题的内容都好充实哈，也崇拜楼主的语速！但是考试的时候写不了这么多不知道会不会很慌
问题有几个：
1.时间都超过45s了哦
2.有些单词的发音还是不太准
3.语音上可以改善一些些，感觉每句话的语音都是上扬的诶

作者: daisy333 时间: 2014-10-6 16:38

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-5 09:41
TPO5 TASK 3456

emily的语速绝对是一大亮点，这样在一分钟内的内容十分全面啊！我每次就是说太慢说不完TAT
就一些小的口误，比如男生说she，然后应该是under pressure不是in pressure。问题不大，棒棒哒！

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-6 16:42

daisy333 发表于 2014-10-6 16:32
12题的内容都好充实哈，也崇拜楼主的语速！但是考试的时候写不了这么多不知道会不会很慌
问题有几个：
1. ...

THANKS!!!! 你也可以的么么哒！！！！

作者: benhuang1991 时间: 2014-10-6 21:49

sclovexj 发表于 2014-10-4 10:41
@benhuang1991,就是比如说我们怎么样给对方评价，需要注重那些细节呢？以提高更好，或是相互提高 ...

主要应该侧重内容和条理有些时候我认为语速快不好因为ETS会听不懂

作者: sclovexj 时间: 2014-10-6 22:16

benhuang1991 发表于 2014-10-6 21:49
主要应该侧重内容和条理有些时候我认为语速快不好因为ETS会听不懂

按照他们评分要求，她的速度不是特别快

作者: houyxqd 时间: 2014-10-7 00:11

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-1 10:36
啦啦啦自己默默补上~~~ 黄金口语&TPO1

1.说出你认为对你最有用的一本书，并解释原因。

第一题和第二题应该是你的思路。不过，张涵那本书更着重一点，然后例子大约占一般的时间，因为你的基础不错，你也具体化给了例子可以尝试。不过，你的语速比较快，因此可能说两点也不错，这个我也不知道啦！

3456,3我觉得思路不是很清晰，后面的都很清晰！
都很好，不过我觉得速度是不是有一点快、
总之，很好啦！

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-7 08:23

houyxqd 发表于 2014-10-7 00:11
第一题和第二题应该是你的思路。不过，张涵那本书更着重一点，然后例子大约占一般的时间，因为你的基础不 ...

谢谢啦！其实我不知道语速快是不是一件坏事

作者: loverony713 时间: 2014-10-8 23:57

9. Describea social or politics celebration events in your culture.

Speaking of socialcelebration in my culture, there is one day of the year that is second to none,the Chinese New Year, which is alsocalled the Spring Festival by mostChinese People. Even if you are indifferent with festive events, you cannotresist the charm of a family reunion dinner which marks the feature ofthe Spring Festival. I always expect the festival because I enjoy eating thedumplings, spring roll, and especially the Beijing Roast Duck in Da DongRestaurant. Just dipping a slice of duckin the sugar, wow, that is really ABite Of China!

Also family members make toasts for each otherin order to wish for joy, health and fortune for the next year. Of course, howcould there be no pocket money for the day!

10.政府是否应该资助建博物馆和剧院。说出你的观点和理由。

Government shouldprovide fund to build museums and theaters.

The Louvre ['lu:və]

Enjoy the glory ofantiquity, magnificent artworks, such as

see the mostcelebrated of all the Louvre’s treasures—the Khorsabad Palace, the Venus de Milo ['maɪlo], Winged [wɪŋd] Victory of Samothrace (胜利女神像), Leonardo’sMona Lisa, Michelangelo’s Slaves

spiritual treasure

Museums also provide an excellent venue forleisure. Even most nominally educated museums provide exciting attractions likemovie theaters and special culture performances such as dance, gourmet dinners,lectures, and musical performances from jazz to rock and roll. Many museums in the United States hold special nightsonce a week where young people can drink and socialize. Museums are not only spaces for education and culture, but have alsobecome important entertainment and social venues.

作者: linglingkatheri 时间: 2015-11-16 21:45
谢谢！！！！

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