记不得哪个帖子挖出来的,应该是RON对V-ING的讲解,里面提到了两个必须都满足。
the"comma + ing" modifier should only be used when:
(A)
itMODIFIES THE ENTIRE ACTION of the preceding clause, and it APPLIES TO THESUBJECT of that clause;
AND
(B)
oneof the following is true:
(1)the "ing" action is SIMULTANEOUS with, and SUBORDINATE to, the mainaction;
-i ran down the sidewalk, flapping my arms wildly
(2)the "ing" action is a DIRECTAND IMMEDIATE CONSEQUENCE of the mainaction.
-i got a 100 on the most recent exam, bringing my average up to 91
--
sinceCOMMA + -ING clauses are automatically attributed to the SUBJECT of thepreceding clause, this modifies the moon.
asit clearly should, in context.
alsonote that it applies not only to that subject, but to the entire action of thatclause (this is what makes it "adverbial").
two problems with that choice:
1) when you use a COMMA -ING modifier after a clause**, you should actuallysatisfy TWO requirements:
-- the modifier should modify theaction of the preceding clause, as you have stated;
AND
-- the subject of the preceding clause should alsomake sense as the agent of the-ING action.
examples:
Joe broke the window, angering his father. -->this sentence makes sense,because it correctly implies that Joe "angeredhis father".
thewindow was broken byJoe, angering his father.-->this sentence doesn't make sense, because it implies that the window(i.e., notJoe himself) angered Joe's father.
my brothertricked me, disappointing Dad -->implies that dad is disappointed in my brother for tricking me (and notnecessarily disappointed in me for being tricked).
I was trickedby my brother, disappointing Dad -->implies that dad is disappointed in me because i fell for my brother's trick(and not that he's disappointed in my brother for tricking me).
这里VING做状语。有两个语法功能1——伴随动作,与主句V动同时发生(请参考OG13th 29#):2-----伴随结果,主句带来的a result/a consequencee/a single aspect/a explanation./
虽然动作不可以有逻辑主语发出但是可以看做伴随结果啊,即:窗户被broken 这件事angered joe's father??
my brother tricked on me , angering my father.
旺财财 发表于 2014-9-17 21:52
the machine is important in this factory, which increases the country's income.
这样看吧,我换种 ...
旺财财 发表于 2014-9-17 21:52
the machine is important in this factory, which increases the country's income.
这样看吧,我换种 ...
sunyuwei 发表于 2014-9-18 18:34
还是原来的例子the machine is important in this factory, which increases the country's income. 这 ...
旺财财 发表于 2014-9-17 21:52
the machine is important in this factory, which increases the country's income.
这样看吧,我换种 ...
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