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标题: 关于 ", V-ing..." 的一点讨论（含OG13-35&29） [打印本页]

作者: Amber.C 时间: 2014-8-5 01:21
标题: 关于 ", V-ing..." 的一点讨论（含OG13-35&29）
看完baby姐的解释，关于, v-ing的作用，见link：http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-740934-1-1.html
声明：仅是对语法的讨论，而非对baby姐的challenge，请喜欢归类的同学绕道
OG13-35
By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be of dangerously experimental design.
(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be
(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be
(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were
(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were
(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were
答案是E。
我对baby姐的解释提出如下意见：
我支持prep语法笔记里面的讲法，V-ing的句子可以表示伴随、因果等等多种可能。所以earning在这里也是可行的，可以改写为：
By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, earning them at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were of dangerously experimental design.
但是这个修改在选项里没有，所以只有一个答案E。
正如Ron也说:
"使用comma+ing的条件，即
1) it should apply most nearly to the subject of the preceding clause (as you've said);and, even more importantly,
2) it should have one of the following RELATIONSHIPS to that clause:
* immediate consequence
* simultaneous, but lower-priority, action"
在上述题目中，如果用earning我觉得确实表伴随，表示通过某种方式／手段，或者表示其他伴随同时发生，也显示这句话只是伴随而不是作者所主要表达的意思（因为未划线题干出现了完整主句SVO）。而baby姐的如下举例可能会混淆了理解。
”我觉得”表伴随”是很多中国人的叫法，可能受某培训机构的影响。我从没听美国人说v-ing是表伴随的，所以不认同这个。
就我给的这个例子来说，do all the prep questions和read OG压根就是两件独立的事（OG和Prep各是各的），这两件事是并列关系，可以同时发生，但不是咱说的“表伴随”。如果你要说你干了这两件事，就该用"and"表并列。Dickinson's letter那道题，(A)选项的"outnumbering ..."之所以不对，就是因为前后说了独立的两件事（前面说写于什么时间段，后面说数量超过什么什么），就好比前面说OG后面说prep。
"He read OG for eight times, hoping for a stellar GMAT score. "
这个句子才是说，"hoping for a stellar GMAT score"对于"read OG for eight times"来说，是个"simultaneous, but lower-priority, action" (by Ron)
说的是他本着什么样的目标刷OG，或者说刷OG的时候有啥想法。
或者这样：
He read OG, practicing over 500 questions. （我们知道OG包括over 500 questions，所以"practicing over 500 questions"是补充说明解释"he read OG"）“
baby姐的论点中，我认为：是否用"and"还是用“, V-ing..."取决与题目中是否提供这个选项和是否给出了完整主句SVO。
而Dickinson这题里，在不知道正确答案前，未划线部分没有完整主句。
OG13-29
Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan HuntingtonDickinson were written over a period beginning a fewyears before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother andending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886,outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
(A)  Dickinson were written over a period beginninga few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’sbrother and ending shortly before Emily’s deathin 1886, outnumbering
(B)  Dickinson were written over a period that beginsa few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’sbrother and ended shortly before Emily’s deathin 1886, outnumber
(C)  Dickinson, written over a period beginning a fewyears before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brotherand that ends shortly before Emily’s death in1886 and outnumbering
(D)  Dickinson, which were written over a periodbeginning a few years before Susan’s marriageto Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’sdeath in 1886, and outnumbering

(E) Dickinson, which were written over a periodbeginning a few years before Susan’s marriageto Emily’s brother and ending shortly beforeEmily’s death in 1886, outnumber

答案是E。

如果outnumber改成如下V-ing我理解也是可以的：

＊Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson, outnumbering her letter to anyone else, were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886. （write后面太长了）

但是这个修改在选项里没有，所以只有一个答案E。

所以，在第一题OG13-35里面是应该可以用earning的，但是选项中使用earning的地方（B、C）还有使用and的地方（A）却有其他关键错误（即考点）：so...that & at a time when。

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OG13-35里面还有个关于hold和earn作为动词的讨论，我准备另开一贴，see u 脱毛肉

作者: Amber.C 时间: 2014-8-5 01:25
实在太困了～～期待半夜大NN的出现～～～

作者: 摇曳的叶子 时间: 2014-8-5 11:18
我觉得选择的标准不是题目未划线部分是否给出了完整主句，而是语意。
你标粉的部分和ron对ving的说明已经足够清晰了

作者: 摇曳的叶子 时间: 2014-8-5 11:20
Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson, outnumbering her letter to anyone else, were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886.
你改写的句子语法上是正确的，但是和E选项想表达的中心意思有所偏差。

作者: Amber.C 时间: 2014-8-5 11:37
是的，两者表达的核心内容不太一样。
我觉得这基本就是OG说的，答案不一定是唯一的，但是考试的目的就是从选项里选一个。
在这里的讨论只是一个扩展。

作者: dabaolurker 时间: 2014-8-26 08:28

Amber.C 发表于 2014-8-5 11:37
是的，两者表达的核心内容不太一样。
我觉得这基本就是OG说的，答案不一定是唯一的，但是考试的目的就是从 ...

关于Emily那题，为什么outnumber不用过去式？之前都是过去式的were written之类，这里用outnumbered不好吗？

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