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作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-24 10:07
标题: 雪耻双23作文贴！—— 贾少女马甲重新开贴。
嫌弃原来的号昵称太难听！
经小队长提醒还可以重新注册的！

换了新昵称之后吃嘛嘛香身体倍儿棒感觉自己萌~萌~哒~

现在作文都放在这里啦~~~
感谢各位看官修改么~么~哒~

原来的作文贴，给自己贴个tip：http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-911475-1-1.html

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-24 20:12
724综合：
Both the writer and the professor remark upon the topic of literature reading. The writer in the passage worried that the mass audience spends less time on literature books. However, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on the reading material.

First and foremost, the writer contends that we lose chances on exercising imagination and other abilities because of reading less literature. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture claims that we don't have to focus on the literature. Other categories such as science, history and politics can also stimulate intellecture. Those high-quality books provide a creative way to exercise imagination. Therefore, the lecture is opposite to the reading passage.

In addition, running counter to the belief in the reading passage that people nowadays are spending more time on trivial forms of entertainment, the professor explains that other forms of art such as music and movie are as valuable as literature. Those so-called low standard entertainment gives us a more direct way to understand culture, which keeps pace with the social development. Thus the lecture is at odds with the reading part.

Furthermore, the writer points out that less investment was put into the literature due a lack of audience. This statement is refuted by what is stated in the lecture - - the readers should not be blamed since it is the author's fault to make those literature books too difficult to understand.

To sum up, the reading part is totally jeopardized by the lecture.

我还是喜欢改在word里 = = 附上word文档一份

作者: GJason 时间: 2014-7-24 23:20
留下记号，明天来改

作者: GJason 时间: 2014-7-25 14:53
贾贾，非常抱歉我要回老家照顾我的孩子，到周一我会改好给你。再次表示抱歉。。。

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-25 16:04
724 独立写作
这篇作文写的心里挺没底的，一个是因为第二个论点和第三个论点我自己觉得其实讲的像一回事情，第二是因为很多单词我不知道怎么表达，自己生造了一些比如new-graduate，也不知道有没有这些词。
感谢奶爸修改吧，附上附件

Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly asone’s career throughout the world. Nowadays as people find it becomesincreasingly difficult to find an ideal job, topic among the ability of eitheradaptation to new environment or mastery of excellent knowledge for job is moreimportant to maintain a good job performance has triggered an intensediscussion. In my point of view, either of these two abilities has its ownmerits and demerits, nevertheless, after taking all these elements intoconsideration, I assert that adjusting oneself to the new environment quicklyis play a more crucial role in one’s career.

On top of my argument, adaptation is aquick way to put one’s ability into use. As team spirit become more and moresignificant in the society, one cannot complete a group assignment on his owneven though he has a good command of job required knowledge. Everyone has hisown position in the team, thus for a freshman to company, only with a quickadaptation to the new environment can one contribute his efforts. This kind ofadaptation equips the employees with self-esteem, which could afford them thesense of belonging and fulfillment and encourage them work harder later on. Justtake my brother Tom, who was a graduate and entered an IT firm last year, as anexample. Firstly, Tom was assigned to a product development team, in which bothcreativity and professional knowledge are necessary. To everyone’s surprise, asa newly-graduated, Tom played an inspirer role in the team, who could apply allhe learned in the university together with up-to-date ideas. In this case, Tomhas the ability to adjust himself to the requirement of the team, which gavehim a competitive edge over others. After all, the excellent knowledge is onlyvaluable when it is put into practice.

Furthermore, a good adaptation means anability to learn and to apply. As we all known, time changes more rapidly thanwe imagine, thus there will always be new-developed techniques that we need toupdate our knowledge. Whereas these knowledge especially prepared for jobs mayjust be learned by rote, which lacks flexibility consequently. Therefore, it’sbetter to adjust oneself according to job requirements instead of learning forlearning’s own sake.

In addition, only after you adapt yourselfto the unfamiliar environment can you start to explore the new skills andknowledge related to job. Imagine what if a man with excellent vocationalknowledge changes his job to another industry without adapting to the workenvironment there?

One can never guarantee that he has graspall the related knowledge, be curious for the unfamiliar field and equip anopen mind to accept is always a way to explore. Just as famous saying goes, ifyou give a man a fish, you feed him for a day. But if you teach him how tofish, you feed him for his life.

After ruminating all the factors,adaptation brings implementation of knowledge, ability to learn and explore areall compelling justifications for good adaptation skills to be more importantthan just mastery of knowledge for job. As an undergraduate prepared to stepinto the society, it is high time that we should learn to adjust our roleaccording to the new environment.

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-25 16:05

GJason 发表于 2014-7-25 14:53
贾贾，非常抱歉我要回老家照顾我的孩子，到周一我会改好给你。再次表示抱歉。。。 ...

好的，奶爸加油~~~

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-26 10:03
725 TPO 12 intergrated

Both the writer and the professor remarkupon the topic of Jane Austen's portrait. The writer in the reading passageconfirms that the portrait was adolescent Jane herself. The professor in thelecture, however, casts doubt on the reading part.

First and foremost, the writer contendsthat this portrait was recognized by the Austen's family. On the contrary, theprofessor demonstrates that since in 1882 Austen has already been dead for morethan 70 years, none of the family members has actually seen Austen themselves.As a result, no one can endorse the claim for certain that it is Austen'steenager portrait. Therefore, the lecture is opposite to the writer'sexpectation.

Furthermore, running counter to the beliefby the writer that the face in the portrait resembles the sketch of an adultAusten, the professor claims that it is highly possible that the face was oneof the adolescent relative in Austen's large family. Actually, some specialistspeculates that the portrait was the image of Austen's distant relative, whoresembles some part of teenager Austen. Thus the professor's claim is at oddswith the reading part.

In addition, the writer points out that thepainting was drawn by Ozias, who would be hired by Austen's family. However,the professor refuted what was stated in the reading passage - - although thepainting is unsigned and undated, the stamp in the back of the portaitdemonstrates that the painting did not sold when Austen was a teenager,instead, it is when she was at the age of 27.

To sum up, the lecture by the professor istotally jeopardized by the reading material.

作者: slave918 时间: 2014-7-26 12:01
725 TPO 12 intergrated 修改稿

阅读部分，我觉得应该要突出paint's style和 Ozias 像这件事。

To sum up, the lecture by the professor istotally jeopardized by the reading material.

没有发现语法错误，听力的点都答到了。
并且用了用词很丰富，点赞。

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-26 13:21

slave918 发表于 2014-7-26 12:01
725 TPO 12 intergrated 修改稿

Both the writer and the professor remarkupon the topic of ...

谢谢啦~~~

修改稿

Both the writer and the professor remarkupon the topic of Jane Austen's portrait. The writer in the reading passage confirmsthat the portrait was adolescent Jane herself. The professor in the lecture,however, casts doubt on the reading part.

First and foremost, the writer contends thatthis portrait was recognized by the Austen's family. On the contrary, the professordemonstrates that no one can endorse the claim for certain that it is Austen's teenagerportrait since in 1882 Austen has already been dead for more than 70 years.That is to say, none of the family members has actually seen Austen themselves.Therefore, the lecture is opposite to the writer's expectation.

Furthermore, running counter to thebelief by the writer that the face in the portrait resembles the sketch of anadult Austen, the professor claims that it is highly possible that the face wasone of the adolescent relative in Austen's large family. Actually, somespecialist speculates that the portrait was the image of Austen's distantrelative, who resembles some part of teenager Austen. Thus the professor'sclaim is at odds with the reading part.

In addition, the writer points out thatthe painting was drawn by Ozias, who would be hired by Austen's family andwhose style resembles the portrait. However, the professor refuted what wasstated in the reading passage - - although the painting is unsigned andundated, the stamp in the back of the portait demonstrates that the paintingdid not sold when Austen was a teenager, instead, it is when she was at the ageof 27.

To sum up, the lecture by the professor is totally jeopardized by the readingmaterial.

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-26 17:19
TPO 13 综合

Both the writer and the professor remarkupon the topic of fossil trades. The writer in the passage demonstrates that boththe public and scientists do not benefit from those business where privatecollectors spending millions purchasing fossils. The professor in the lecture,however, claims that its advantages outweigh disadvantages.

First and foremost, the writer contendsthat the public would lose the chance to view the fossils. On the contrary, theprofessor in the lecture asserts that the fossil trades would increase thefossil explosure to the public because institutions such as public schools alsoget the opportunity to purchase fossils rountinely. Actually, the generalpublic would be easier to see the fossils themselves. Therefore, the lecture isopposite to the writer's expectation.

Furthermore, running counter to the beliefin the reading passage that scientists may miss out some potential discoveriesdue to lost access to some important fossils, the professor claims that all thefossils ready to be sold are scientific identified. That is to say, thosefossils have passed through the hands of scientists to be tested, guaranteeingthat they would not miss out anything at all. Thus the lecture is at odds withthe reading passage.

In addition, the writer points out thatcommercial fossil collectors, who are untrained or uninterested commonly, oftendestroy valuable scientific evidence where fossils were unearthed. However,this idea is refuted by what is stated in the lecture, saying that withoutthose commercial trades, some fossils may even remain undiscovered. It's betterto let the scientist lose some surrounded data than completely undiscover them.

To sum up, the lecture by the professor istotally jeopardized by the reading material.

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-26 23:52
726 独立这篇用时一个小时了快，泪奔
Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly as success throughout the world. As people’s living quality has become better and better, topic upon if people nowadays care more about public recognition than about money has triggered an intense discussion. In my point of view, both the public recognition and money are crucial to one’s career. Nevertheless, after taking all the elements into consideration, I totally agree that even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.

First and foremost, respect from others is more important than money to the young generation in the modern society. As we are in a time of peace, most of us can afford ample clothing and food. Although a rags-to-riches story facilitated plenty of young people to struggle to earn a living in the past days, now those kind of rich appears to be less attractive any more. Actually, what they value more is a sense of belonging to the society, where they can be recognized, respect and valued by the general public. For instance, my brother Tom works in an investment banks in Wall Street. He is such a workaholic that works overtime almost every day and hardly has any free moment. Whenever I asked him what attracts him to expose himself under such an intense pressure, was it due to the high salary there? He said the Wall Street afforded him the sense of fulfillment, which he enjoyed most instead of money. Therefore, public recognition can encourage people work harder.

Furthermore, young people’s awareness of upward mobility has been raised nowadays. That is to say, the young generation tends to enter the upper class by their own efforts. The feeling of achievement is better than gaining money directly instead. Just take the president Bill Clinton as an example. Clinton was born in a single family and was grown up in Arkansas whose economic condition was not so stable all the time. As an ordinary person Clinton has a longing for others recognition. It is the upward mobility that facilitates Clinton to work hard. In this case, money itself seems to be so vulnerable compared with the public recognition.

In addition, public recognition brings us self-esteem, which motivates young people to devote themselves to jobs. Imagine when you finally overcome a difficulty in job, the praise from your boss and the recognition from your colleagues are more valuable than your salary since those prove that you have the competitive edge over others. What’s more, this sense of achievement recognized by the public will encourage you to work harder. Therefore, even if no more money is given, still the young generation is willing to work harder in order to embrace to the sense of achievement created the surround.

After ruminating all the factors, respect from the public, awareness of upward mobility and self-esteem brought by the public are all compelling justification for the public’s recognition. As a member of the young generation, it’s high time that we work harder for ourselves instead of money itself.

作者: lynettelyq 时间: 2014-7-27 15:47
Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly as success throughout the world. As people’s living quality has become better and better, topic upon if people nowadays care more about public recognition than about money has triggered an intense discussion. In my point of view, both the public recognition and money are crucial to one’s career. Nevertheless, after taking all the elements into consideration, I totally agree that even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder. （我觉得你第一段模板好赞，可以有这么长，默默的学习啦）

First and foremost, respect from others is more important than money to the young generation in the modern society. As we are in a time of peace, most of us can afford ample clothing and food. Although a rags-to-riches story facilitated plenty of young people to struggle to earn a living in the past days, now those kind of rich appears to be less attractive any more. Actually, what they value more is a sense of belonging to the society, where they can be recognized, respect（respected？） and valued by the general public. For instance, my brother Tom works in an investment banks（bank） in Wall Street. He is such a workaholic that works overtime almost every day and hardly has any free moment. Whenever I asked him what attracts him to expose himself under such an intense pressure, was it due to the high salary there? He said the Wall Street afforded him the sense of fulfillment, which he enjoyed most instead of money（instead of money这句语法有没有问题呀，我不太确定）. Therefore, public recognition can encourage people work harder.

Furthermore, young people’s awareness of upward mobility（这句话学习了！） has been raised nowadays. That is to say, the young generation tends to enter the upper class by their own efforts. The feeling of achievement is better than gaining money directly instead. Just take the president Bill Clinton as an example. Clinton was born in a single family and was grown up in Arkansas whose economic condition was not so stable all the time. As an ordinary person Clinton has a longing for others recognition. It is the upward mobility that facilitates Clinton to work hard. In this case, money itself seems to be so vulnerable compared with the public recognition.

In addition, public recognition brings us self-esteem, which motivates young people to devote themselves to jobs. Imagine when you finally overcome a difficulty in job, the praise from your boss and the recognition from your colleagues are more valuable than your salary since those prove that you have the competitive edge over others. What’s more, this sense of achievement recognized by the public will encourage you to work harder. Therefore, even if no more money is given, still the young generation is willing to work harder in order to embrace to （是不是不要to？）the sense of achievement created the surround.

After ruminating all the factors, respect from the public, awareness of upward mobility and self-esteem brought by the public are all compelling justification for the public’s recognition. As a member of the young generation, it’s high time that we work harder for ourselves instead of money itself.

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-27 19:21
727 独立：

First and foremost, comparison betweendomestic and foreign goods can help improve the overall quality of products. Ifthe customers insist on domestic goods regardless of the price and quality, domesticcompany would gradually fall behind other foreign companies since they do nothave to bear the risk of losing customers and decreasing sales. Just like a kidwould become lazy if the family spoils him. As it describes in the economictheory that a fair competitive market would boost the economy most, acomparison between products can help find out the weakness of design andquality and strengthen it accordingly. Therefore, an advocate of purchasingdomestic goods blindly is not a wise choice.

In addition, it is hard to tell which kindof products belongs to domestic goods. As the world tend to become a globalvillage nowadays, a large amount of international companies spring up.Commonly, different parts would be manufactured all the around the world and endup with assembling in the final country. It also explains why internationalcompanies always maintain a relatively low price as well as an above-averagequality. Consequently, even if you purchase foreign goods, some raw material orparticular parts may also be produced domestically. Supposing we boycottforeign good, the domestic economy would be hurt in term of tax and so on. Thusin support of some cheap and nice foreign goods may protect the country’sexportation as well.

Admittedly, insisting on domestic goods belongsto a kind of patriotism because the purpose of such behavior is to increase domesticsales and stimulate economy. However, this patriotism appears to benarrow-minded without accepting other competitors. The true patriotism is tofind a way to improve quality and control cost in order to establish acompetitive edge over other foreign goods.

After ruminating all the factors intoconsideration, improvement of overall quality and possible promotion ofdomestic economy all are compelling justifications in support of my argument.In order to express our patriotism in a right way and truly benefit domesticcompanies, it’s high time that we should treat all products equally whateverwhere they produced.

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-27 23:25

lynettelyq 发表于 2014-7-27 15:47
Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly as success throughout the world. As people’s living quality ...

修改讨论稿：
Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly as success throughout the world. As people’s living quality has become better and better, topic upon if people nowadays care more about public recognition than about money has triggered an intense discussion. In my point of view, both the public recognition and money are crucial to one’s career. Nevertheless, after taking all the elements into consideration, I totally agree that even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder. （我觉得你第一段模板好赞，可以有这么长，默默的学习啦）
1. 想问下这里有没有更好的写法啊，总觉得这样很俗

First and foremost, respect from others is more important than money to the young generation in the modern society. As we are in a time of peace, most of us can afford ample clothing and food. Although a rags-to-riches story facilitated plenty of young people to struggle to earn a living in the past days, now those kind of rich appears to be less attractive any more. Actually, what they value more is a sense of belonging to the society, where they can be recognized, respected（respected？） and valued by the general public. For instance, my brother Tom works in an investment bank（bank） in Wall Street. He is such a workaholic that works overtime almost every day and hardly has any free moment. Whenever I asked him what attracts him to expose himself under such an intense pressure, was it due to the high salary there? He said the Wall Street afforded him the sense of fulfillment, which could not be brought by money （instead of money这句语法有没有问题呀，我不太确定）. Therefore, public recognition can encourage people work harder.

Furthermore, young people’s awareness of upward mobility（这句话学习了！） has been raised nowadays. That is to say, the young generation tends to enter the upper class by their own efforts. The feeling of achievement is better than gaining money directly instead. Just take the president Bill Clinton as an example. Clinton was born in a single family and was grown up in Arkansas whose economic condition was not so stable all the time. As an ordinary person Clinton has a longing for others recognition. It is the upward mobility that facilitates Clinton to work hard. In this case, money itself seems to be so vulnerable compared with the public recognition.

In addition, public recognition brings us self-esteem, which motivates young people to devote themselves to jobs. Imagine when you finally overcome a difficulty in job, the praise from your boss and the recognition from your colleagues are more valuable than your salary since those prove that you have the competitive edge over others. What’s more, this sense of achievement recognized by the public will encourage you to work harder. Therefore, even if no more money is given, still the young generation is willing to work harder in order to embrace（是不是不要to？）the sense of achievement created the surround.

After ruminating all the factors, respect from the public, awareness of upward mobility and self-esteem brought by the public are all compelling justification for the public’s recognition. As a member of the young generation, it’s high time that we work harder for ourselves instead of money itself.

感觉自己第二段论据还是写的很苍白，我有空再详改一次

作者: lynettelyq 时间: 2014-7-28 08:40

资深少女_贾贾发表于 2014-7-27 19:21
727 独立：

Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly asglobalization by people throughout the world. ...

Perhaps no issue is talked as commonly as globalization by people throughout the world. With the development of logisticsand information transformation, people nowadays can easily purchase products manufactured around the world. Topics concerning whether we should buy domesticgoods or cheaper foreign goods has triggered an intense discussion. In my pointof view, both of these two options have their own merits and demerits.Nevertheless, after taking all the elements into consideration, I assert that weshould treat those products equally whatever where they were manufactured.（我个人觉得这里不用were，因为这是一个客观事实？）（还有一个小想法是，Nevertheless这边稍稍有点怪，逻辑感觉跳了一步，你是经过下文的考虑才有的Nevertheless，要不提一下？你自己看哦）
First and foremost, comparison between domestic and foreign goods can help improve the overall quality of products. Ifthe customers insist on domestic goods regardless of the price and quality, domesticcompany would gradually fall behind other foreign companies since they do nothave to bear the risk of losing customers and decreasing sales. Just like a kidwould become lazy if the family spoils him. As it describes in the economictheory that a fair competitive market would boost the economy most, acomparison between products can help find out the weakness of design andquality and strengthen it accordingly. Therefore, an advocate of purchasingdomestic goods blindly is not a wise choice.
In addition, it is hard to tell which kindof products belongs to domestic goods. As the world tend to become a globalvillage nowadays, a large amount of international companies spring up.Commonly, different parts would be manufactured all the around the world and endup with assembling in the final country. It also explains why internationalcompanies always maintain a relatively low price as well as an above-averagequality. Consequently, even if you purchase foreign goods, some raw material orparticular parts may also （是不是应该用still？）be produced domestically. Supposing we boycottforeign good, the domestic economy would be hurt in term of tax and so on. Thusin support of some cheap and nice foreign goods may protect the country’sexportation as well.
Admittedly, insisting on domestic goods belongsto a kind of patriotism because the purpose of such behavior is to increase domesticsales and stimulate economy. However, this patriotism appears to benarrow-minded without accepting other competitors. The true patriotism is tofind a way to improve quality and control cost in order to establish acompetitive edge over other foreign goods.
After ruminating all the factors intoconsideration, improvement of overall quality and possible promotion ofdomestic economy all are compelling justifications in support of my argument.In order to express our patriotism in a right way and truly benefit domesticcompanies, it’s high time that we should treat all products equally whateverwhere they produced.

我觉得你写的已经挺好的了哎。开头你要想模版更好一点要不借鉴一下老美185，看看有木有什么好的句子。

作者: GJason 时间: 2014-7-28 16:15
贾贾，24日的作文今天才给你改出来，实在抱歉哦。
jiajia 的词汇和句式变化还是不错的，继续加油。
在写作思路方面，可以考虑把抽象的问题具体化，比如说适应性重要，那么是什么原因导致了适应性重要呢？新工作环境、产业发展速度快、经济全球化等等，避免论点之间的重叠就好了。

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-28 16:38

GJason 发表于 2014-7-28 16:15
贾贾，24日的作文今天才给你改出来，实在抱歉哦。
jiajia 的词汇和句式变化还是不错的，继续加油。
在写作 ...

太感谢啦~~~ 我会好好精改然后发上来的！

作者: yagiliang 时间: 2014-7-28 22:53
你好，这是我26号的作业，many thanks
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-908356-1-1.html

作者: yagiliang 时间: 2014-7-28 23:03
Dear，我觉得你的综合写的很不错，请问你的听力是一次性就能get到所有的point吗？

btw，我找不到你26号的独立哦

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-7-28 23:34

yagiliang 发表于 2014-7-28 23:03
Dear，我觉得你的综合写的很不错，请问你的听力是一次性就能get到所有的point吗？

btw，我找不到你26号的 ...

是一次性听的。
独立在这一页的顶部吖~~~ 就在这个帖子里面有标题的

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-8-3 23:34
8/3 TPO 21
Both the professor and the writer remark upon the topic of genetically modified trees. The writer in the passage demonstrates that planting genetically modified trees brings plenty of benefits. The professor, however, casts doubt on the reading part.

First, the writer contends that genetically modified trees are hardier so that they are more likely to survive compared to nature trees. On the contrary the professor in the lecture claims that natural choice would help the species survive the most resistant ones in face of nature disaster. That means all the genetically modified trees would die out if sudden change happened such as climate change or new kinds of pest. In that way, genetically modified trees are no more resistant, which is opposite to the reading passage.

In addition, running counter to the belief in the reading part that genetically modified trees brings more economic benefits, the professor demonstrates that the seeds of genetically modified trees cannot be simply collected and then grow as normal trees. Therefore, the farmers have to pay company for the special seeds each time they plant. Actually, it is not economical any more, which is at odds with the reading material.

Furthermore, the writer explains that genetically modified trees can help protect wild trees from overexploitation, even save some unique or rare species. However, this idea is refuted by what is stated in the lecture. The professor points out that genetically modified trees are aggressive compared to native trees so that it is possible that they will out compete the nature trees in crowded forests consuming more water and other nutrition.

To sum up, the lecture is totally jeopardized by the reading passage.

作者: Terry95 时间: 2014-8-4 20:11

资深少女_贾贾发表于 2014-8-3 23:34
8/3 TPO 21
Both the professor and the writer remark upon the topic of genetically modified trees. Th ...

8/3 TPO 21
Both the professor and the writer remark upon the topic of genetically modified trees. The writer in the passage demonstrates that planting genetically modified trees brings plenty of benefits. The professor, however, casts doubt on the reading part.

First, the writer contends that genetically modified trees are hardier so that they are more likely to survive compared to nature trees. On the contrary the professor in the lecture claims that natural choice would help the species survive the most resistant ones in face of nature disaster. That means all the genetically modified trees would die out if sudden change happened such as climate change or new kinds of pest. In that way, genetically modified trees are no more resistant, which is opposite to the reading passage.

In addition, running counter to the belief in the reading part that genetically modified trees brings more economic benefits, the professor demonstrates that the seeds of genetically modified trees cannot be simply collected and then grow as normal trees. Therefore, the farmers have to pay company for the special seeds each time they plant. Actually, it is not economical any more, which is at odds with the reading material.

Furthermore, the writer explains that genetically modified trees can help protect wild trees from overexploitation, even save some unique or rare species. However, this idea is refuted by what is stated in the lecture. The professor points out that genetically modified trees are aggressive compared to native trees so that it is possible that they will out compete the nature trees in crowded forests consuming more water and other nutrition.

To sum up, the lecture is totally jeopardized by the reading passage

这篇文章真好，可当范文了。

作者: Terry95 时间: 2014-8-4 21:48
贾美女，也看看我的作文啊，特别是关注一下文章里面的逻辑问题。

作者: 资深少女_贾贾 时间: 2014-8-4 22:46

Terry95 发表于 2014-8-4 21:48
贾美女，也看看我的作文啊，特别是关注一下文章里面的逻辑问题。

谢谢啦~ 我马上看，不好意思哈

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