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作者: wensisheng 时间: 2014-6-29 23:58
标题: 大家来讨论一下OG13 SC20吧

20. Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
(A) that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of
(B) that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double
(C) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled
(D) of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of
(E) of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of

看了很多帖子的各种分析，想写一下自己对这道题目的分析，请各位大牛们指正！
这道题目，很多人错在看到more than就认为是比较，所以一直想要做parallelism, 其实more than是作为double的副词出现的，例如这句话中的作用：The exchange rate of US dollar has been more than doubled.

明白了这一点以后，再来看选项就比较明晰了：

A：Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
提炼一下：主句（Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August）, 从句表结果（intensifying expectations that PS2 doubled that of the growth rate in PS1）
因为PS1和PS2在句子里面都已经出现过了，“that of”没有东西可以指代，而且double应该用于形容growth rate，此外OG上说到因为这个double rate的事情涉及到的expectation是conditional的，所以应该使用would double，而非doubled，所以A是错误i的。

B：Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
提炼一下：主句（Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August）, 从句表结果（intensifying expectations that PS2 would double the growth rate in PS1）
正确！

C：Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
这里出现了“ expectations of personal spending ”personal spending 作为expectations的定语，提炼后的句子主干为：
主句（Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August）, 从句表结果（intensifying expectations, that it double the growth rate in PS1）
that it 为单数形式没有可以指代的事物，就算是复数形式（that they）也不能用于double the growth rate的主语，整个句子句意有问题，且that的出现是没有任何意义的，double时态错误。

D：Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
提炼后的句子主干为：
主句（Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August）, 从句表结果（intensifying expectations doubling that of growth rate in PS1）
expectations 不能double growth rate，that 无所指代，Ving出现在前面无逗号的情况下用于形容紧贴的名词，如：I took a picture of cat running around.此处doubling的使用语义不正确。

E：Retail sales rose 0.8 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
这个答案的错误就是C和D错误的综合体。。。

以上是我自己的总结，希望对大家有帮助，如果有问题请大牛指正，以免误导大家~~~~~

作者: brfmzbjz 时间: 2014-6-30 11:46
总结的挺好的

除了, D选项的最大问题是
expectation of personal spending doubling =/ expectation that personal spending would double

作者: sophia.zhang 时间: 2014-7-15 10:18
多谢楼主仔细的分析，正在为此题困惑不已，关于more than的作用很解惑

作者: AgendaChen 时间: 2014-7-22 16:31
楼主你看下OG13关于这题的解释吧，D选项的解释是: Although this option is not technically wrong, it is less clear and graceful than (B)，意思是D选项是没有错误的。。。
我想问的是，如果D选项没有错误，相比B选项中多出来的that of，THAT指代什么？？？

作者: Enster 时间: 2015-11-9 01:42
同意楼上！同问……不理解OG对于D选项的解释……

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