标题: Manhattan 85页一个句子的问题 [打印本页] 作者: lydiaxuxin 时间: 2014-6-10 13:03 标题: Manhattan 85页一个句子的问题 Both shocking and enteraining audiences across the nation, George Carlin, who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.
书上说这句话stylisticaly awkward，改成了：
Both shocking and enteraining audiences across the nation，George Carlin influenced and inspired a generation of comedians， even as he struggled publicly with drug abuse.
为什么后一句就比前一句好？求高手解答~ 作者: DUKB24 时间: 2014-6-11 00:11
“inspired” creates a contrast with “drug abuse”