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标题: OG 13 SC 19 的新疑问!!! [打印本页]

作者: qzawxs9876    时间: 2014-3-5 17:48
标题: OG 13 SC 19 的新疑问!!!
A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.

(A) A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included
(B) The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
(C) Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
(D) Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are
(E) The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly included


我的疑问是关于D选项的这句句子:
Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.

这句话是错的,毋庸置疑,如OG中所说的时态的问题

问题(1):想确认这句话是不是倒转?
            本来总觉得are应该是is,查阅了一下发现没有这样形式的倒装。。。
所以也就有了问题(2): 如果不是倒装,要使得这句话成立就必须:
                                有人就把句子理解成立这样:
                                Included in the pioneer /////journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.
                                可是OG又说:Piling on too many descriptive wordsfor the noun exploits [thepioneerjournalist Nellie Bly's exploits] makes the phrase                 unwieldy and awkward.

所以总结问题: 这句话的错误是仅仅在于时态的问题,还是句子本生就是个fragement???







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