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标题: 求助各位大神og13一篇作文的思路,题目已经粘在帖子里,看过范文都是还是觉得不太合适 [打印本页]

作者: 陌淩    时间: 2013-11-21 16:00
标题: 求助各位大神og13一篇作文的思路,题目已经粘在帖子里,看过范文都是还是觉得不太合适
If the paper from every morning edition of the nation's largest newspaper were collected and rendered into paper pulp that the newspaper could
reuse, about 5 million trees would be saved each year. This kind of recycling is unnecessary, however, since the newspaper maintains its own
forests to ensure an uninterrupted supply of paper


作者: soulwangh    时间: 2013-12-4 22:13

1\one-sideness recommendation:
a)continuous supply =/= not necessary if you want to reduce cost or gain whatever purpose
b)not necessary for news paper =/= not necessary in any aspect

2\all things are equal
now be continuous =/=tomorrow will be continuous





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