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标题: 2013.11.17托福独立作文范文+解析(Kevin原创) [打印本页]

作者: kevinxiekan    时间: 2013-11-18 00:58
标题: 2013.11.17托福独立作文范文+解析(Kevin原创)
题:Do you agree ordisagree: We can learn about a person from the books and movies that thisperson like.

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题型:证明现象是否存在
论点:让步
角度:具象拆分


开头:同意这种情况确实存在,并给出2种情况。(话题引入+双方/某方观点+我的观点及过渡)
The leaps and bounds of the society notonly embody in the economy of a country but also in people’s abundant spirituallife. Books and movies are becoming an indispensable part of this spirituallife. Thus, an interesting discussion has arisen: whether we can learn about aperson from the books and movies that this person likes? Opinions are dividedand personally speaking, I hold that a person’s preferences and personalities canbe roughly grasped through his or her favorite books and movies. And there are3 examples that can illustrate my viewpoint.93字)

中间段1:喜欢看侦探片和侦探小说的人通常心思缜密且爱脑筋。(主题句+解释+细节扩展)
The first example centers on those who havea liking for detective fictions and movies. As is known to all, detective fictionsor movies are usually characterized by interlocking plots, cliffhanging scenesand complex relationship between characters. A preference for this kind oftheme mirrors a thoughtful and inquiring mind. I have a friend who seemsbewitched by Sherlock Holms series. He said that reading the book is just like havingreal experiences with Sherlock and Watson analyzing the clues, cracking theriddles one after another. In daily life, my friend is well known for his powerfullogic in his speaking and writing.103字)

中间段2:喜欢看爱情故事的人通常多愁善感,比较脆弱。(主题句+解释+细节扩展)
Another good case in point is that lovestory usually draws to those people who are sensitive, emotional andsentimental. Contrary to detective story, romance fictions and movies normallyhave a slow and long narrative style in which the relationship between the heroand heroine undergoes ups and downs. Constantly impacted by this kind ofsettings, the reader’s metal model is gradually hardening into an inclinationto yearn for perfect love and resent secular or traditional restrain. Forexample, faithful readers of Qiong Yao, a famous romance novelist in China, arelikely to have a vulnerable personality in real life, which makes them lack ofsense of security and always afraid of being hurt.114字)
让步段:当然,有些人爱好广泛,书和电影看的比较杂,仅凭几本书和电影不能看出他到底属于哪种人。但是如果长期观察他看的书和电影,还是能从比率中判断出他/她大致的性格和偏好。(承认主观点不到位的地方+打压)
Admittedly, for some people whose taste ofbooks and movies is extensive, we surely cannot judge what kind of person he orshe is simply depending on a couple of books or movies. However, if we aregiven an opportunity to observe this person’s reading or viewing habits in thelong run, for example, 1 year, then his preference will clearly been seen andthe preference for which kind of books or movies can reveal the personality andmore of this person.82字)

结尾:重申观点,归纳理由/升华主题
From what has been discussed above, we cansafely draw a conclusion that a person can been generally understood via thebooks and movies he or she is reading or watching. Just like an old sayinggoes, “you are what you read”. It means that although books or movies serve thepurpose of entertaining us, or helping us kills time, more importantly, theyshape who we are in some way.70字)




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