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标题: 曼哈顿Chapter 8-15 [打印本页]

作者: lydiaxuxin 时间: 2013-11-4 17:00
标题: 曼哈顿Chapter 8-15
原句是Courtney's experiences at Haleford, a large research university with renowed professors, affluent students, and imposing buildings, were unlike her high school on the reservation.
答案修改为：Courtney's experiences at Haleford, a large research university with renowed professors, affluent students, and imposing buildings, were unlike her experiences in her high school on the reservation.
但是按照GMAT一贯要求的简洁，不是更应该改成 Courtney's experiences at Haleford, a large research university with renowed professors, affluent students, and imposing buildings, were unlike those in her high school on the reservation吗？
为什么这里不用those?是会有歧义还是说两个都可以？
跪谢！

作者: laizi 时间: 2013-11-4 22:54
those 前又是experience，又是 professors, students, buildings，这么多个复数名词，后面来个those指代，很难搞清到底指谁阿。。不如来个her experience 简明啦。。

简洁要建立在句意表达清晰的基础之上。。我理解的句意表达清晰就是两个含义：1. 忠实原文 2. 让别人读懂。

作者: lydiaxuxin 时间: 2013-11-10 00:20

laizi 发表于 2013-11-4 22:54
those 前又是experience，又是 professors, students, buildings，这么多个复数名词，后面来个those指代， ...

多谢！说的很对！

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