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作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-20 16:02
标题: 破个釜沉个舟，11.24要杀TTTTTT！！！！求狠狠劈！！
10.19 独立作文 A\D students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies

It is universally acknowledge that there are a lot of organization activities and academic studies in colleges. Some people believe that academic studying is no doubt the most important thing we should do in college. While other people consider that we cannot emphasize the importance of club activities too much. As far as I am consider, both are necessary in our college life. But different students should take time to know into which category they fit.

Firstly, for students whose major are somewhat specialized such as engineering and accounting and medical science and so on, they need focus on their major because the knowledge they should master are technological and professional. Therefore they need more academic studies and they can get many benefits from them. The situation also could be applied on those pupils who are concentrated their grade. Take my brother Mike for an example, Mike studied engineering and he wanted to use his grade to apply for some postgraduate school; but he did not accomplish his goal because of his low grade in all of his four years in college, the reason why his grade was not enough is that he joined many club activities rather than studied his major.

On the other hand, I think students whose major is management and business can get more benefits from organization activities than from academic studies. An advantage of club activities is it will train people's abilities to communicate with other people, as a result of which, a person's confidence and experience will be enhanced. Because the humanities of a administer or a generalist is the strongest foundation for them to succeed, it is conceivable that academic studies are not as important as club activities.

All in all, as a college student, on no account can we completely ignore each one of the both aspects because we live in aworld where knowledge is accumulated exponentially and at the same time become more and more specialized and we need to fill ourselves with not only academic intellectual but also practicing experiences.

作者: Aprilmi 时间: 2013-10-20 16:24

好的，不过sorry，有点事可能要迟点才能帮你改了，顺便弱弱地问一句，那个A\D是什么意思~

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-20 16:38

Aprilmi 发表于 2013-10-20 16:24
好的，不过sorry，有点事可能要迟点才能帮你改了，顺便弱弱地问一句，那个A\D是什么意思~ ...

木关系~ A|D 是agree or disagree 滴意思。。。

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-21 16:16
10.21 独立 A\D the rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict

We live in thea world where knowledge is accumulated exponentially and at the same time becomes more and more specialized, so there is no denying that nowadays society bring out some stricts rules such as specialization and generalisation.

Firstly, specialization. Many area like engineering, accounting and medical science need specialists who are educated with technological and professional knowledges. These young men are often full of press because they must be always focusing the work they are handling to make sure the qualitified ratios. Take my parctice job in a mechnical factory for an example, when I firstly got my job allocation, I was been shocked for the details of my job. What I need to do is to measure a length of a frame of a product. However, I was a student who hadn't touched this type work before, so that it was conceivable that I was at a loss what to do. Even though I finally worked them out through others' help, I had to say what a strict job it was for a young man.

Secondly, generalisation. There is an increasing demand for people who are capble to see all of things of an area in a glance, people who are able to see the whole forest rather than trees, people known as generalist, especially in occuption such as administrater or manager. Today when young men are just graduated from university and walked into work place, the society make excessive demands for them to communicate with colleagues very well and to organize work and time perfectly. For instance, my friend Mike was admitted into a company last year, later he complained to me that he often critized by his boss because he could deal with other people and was unable to planning his own work very well wheareas he thought he had done his utmost to do his work. As far as I am concerned, most companies indeed have strict rules.

Admittedly, there are some aspects that society does not regulate strict rules such as ceremony and convention because our society has made a progress from the old customer.

All in all, I believe the rules of whole society are too strict for us young people. To make us better to work and more confortable to live, it is the time that society should concern about quality of our mind and life.

作者: Aprilmi 时间: 2013-10-21 22:05
终于改好了，楼主饶命~

作者: Aprilmi 时间: 2013-10-21 22:07
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-877818-1-1.html 我的作文，谢谢！

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-21 22:24

Aprilmi 发表于 2013-10-21 22:07
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-877818-1-1.html 我的作文，谢谢！

好滴，木有关系，但我今晚貌似木有时间帮你改了，明天下午6点之前肯定会帮你改完哒~~

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-22 15:56

Aprilmi 发表于 2013-10-21 22:07
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-877818-1-1.html 我的作文，谢谢！

小伙伴，你的我已经改完啦~ 红色错误，蓝色建议，高亮是我觉得好的我应该学习的地方。
改的如果有错误要向我反馈啊~

作者: Aprilmi 时间: 2013-10-22 22:10

修一一发表于 2013-10-22 15:56
小伙伴，你的我已经改完啦~ 红色错误，蓝色建议，高亮是我觉得好的我应该学习的地方。
改的如果有错误 ...

谢谢了！楼主改的太好了！感谢！学习了！

作者: yagiliang 时间: 2013-10-23 00:13
不好意思，改晚了

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-23 17:16
A\D teachers' performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers

Educational improvement as the heatedly discussed issue has beencontroversial since it was raised up. Because of its crucial position in themodern social development, the schools are concerned with the quality of theeducation under scrutiny and one of most useful ways applied by schools is toevaluate performance of teacher. Evaluated by students or other teachers? Icannot agree more on the point that this task should be finished by students.

Firstly, students, not other teachers, are alwayscontacting with their teacher. In terms of teaching methods, class contents andpersonality character, it is student who is most familiar with teachers.Therefore, students will present believable and objective evaluation when askedto do the work at the end of a semester. Those who are incapable to teachstudents or whose methodologies are unwelcomed will get a low score, and as aresult of this, they might be fired or looked down. On no count will teachers sluggishunder this situation. They will spare no effort to enrich their pedagogical andimprove themselves, which is closely related to students' satisfactions andfinally grades. Consequently we can notice a virtuous circle.

Furthermore, if the evaluation is operated byother teachers--i.e., their colleagues, there is no denying that the resultsmay be inaccurate. Relationships among teachers are complex sometimes, forexample, a teacher who is a grand old man or popular in crowd but with a poorability in teaching will gain good marks. Conversely, a introvert specialistmay receive an unfair treatment. Rather than focus on their teaching level, allof teachers in this system will tend themselves more sophisticated, so that theoverall educational development is adversely affected.

Admittedly, the condition of student-centeredevaluation leaves some to be desired. For instance, one of my teachers was astrict man, he was likely to get mad and always criticizing us. Even though thefinal subject mean of our class was the best, we gave him a worst evaluation aswe felt unhappy in progress of study. However this is not an usual problem,most teachers' evaluation can be matched with their ability.

To sum up, although that teachers' performance evaluatedby students may causes some drawbacks, it is still a perfect way to improve oureducational standard. We students can also benefit from the work.

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-23 22:12
语言很好，逻辑流畅

Educational improvement as the heatedly discussed issue has been controversial since it was raised up. Because of its crucial position in the modern social development, the schools are concerned with the quality of the education under scrutiny and one of (the) most useful ways applied by schools is to evaluate performance of teacher. Evaluated by students or other teachers? I cannot agree more on the point that this task should be finished by students.

Firstly, students, not other teachers, are always contacting with their teacher(not other teachers放到下句强调句中效果更好). In terms of teaching methods, class contents and personality character, it is student who is most (more or the most) familiar with teachers. Therefore, students will present believable and objective evaluation when asked to do the work at the end of a semester. Those who are incapable to teach students or whose methodologies(这个词用大了，方法论的意思，method就好) are unwelcomed will get a low score, and(and最好不用，有点口语化) as a result of this, they might be fired or looked down. On no count will teachers sluggish under this situation. They will spare no effort to enrich their pedagogical(卧槽，那些年熟悉的GRE词汇) and improve themselves, which is closely related to students' satisfactions andfinally grades. Consequently we can notice( notice我觉得多用于发现了意外的东西，比如卷福notice that he is shaking，这里用form就可) a virtuous circle.

Furthermore, if the evaluation is operated by other teachers--i.e.(最好考试不用缩写), their colleagues, there is no denying that the results may be inaccurate(我觉得这段跟上段不是一个furthermore的关系，可以用on the other hand 开头). Relationships among teachers are complex sometimes, (句号) for example, a teacher who is a grand old man or popular in crowd but with a poor ability in teaching will gain good marks. Conversely, a introvert specialist(专家？) may receive an unfair treatment. Rather than focus on their teaching level, all of teachers in this system will tend themselves more sophisticated, so that the overall educational development is adversely affected.(逻辑流畅)
Admittedly, the condition of student-centered evaluation leaves some to be desired. (不过主题句和例子间加一个解释句更好：有些学生对待老师以自身利益出发)For instance, one of my teachers was a strict man, he was likely to get mad and always criticizing us. Even though the final subject mean of our class was the best, we gave him a worst evaluation as we felt unhappy in progress of study(老外貌似不这么说，in study就好). However this is not an usual problem, most teachers' evaluation can be matched with their ability.(例子举的很好，但有一个问题，老师严厉就给评低分？老师严厉只是个别现象？老师本来就应该strict，所以你可以在一开始说my teacher was a extremely strict man)

To sum up, although that teachers' performance evaluated by students may causes some drawbacks, it is still a perfect way to improve our educational standard. (加个Moreover更好,体现逻辑) We students can also benefit from the work as well.

作者: karen山茶花 时间: 2013-10-24 09:53
同一天要考！顶一下！！

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-24 12:44

karen山茶花发表于 2013-10-24 09:53
同一天要考！顶一下！！

握爪~共同加油！！！

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-24 14:38
A/D the rapid growth in today's world is a mostly positive development for our society

Like a rocket, our world today is developing with an unprecedentedspeed. Certain aspects such as technology, environment, and culture are oftenbeen talked about. However, as one of ancient philosopher saying" morehaste and less speed", shouldn't we come to a halt to reflect ourselvesand plan for ourselves?

Admittedly, we live in a world where technology isaccumulated exponentially and at the same time become more and more advanced.Many products such as smart phone and iPad are wonderful and much technicaltransportation--high speed railways are fast, so convenient are thoseinstruments and infrastructures that they can make our life more modern,efficient and comfortable.

On the other hand, it is universally acknowledgedthat our environment is under severe situation. Global warming and lots ofbreathing diseases are results of increasing discharging carbon-dioxide andsome other harmful gases. Water-pollution is caused by sewage from plenty offactories. Desertification should be blamed for endless destroying forests andwetlands. Nothing is important than to protect our environment because not onlyus but also our generations will live on this beautiful but fragile planet, sothat on no account can we concentrate more on social development than onenvironment protection.

Furthermore, with the rapid development ofsociety, pressure of life is emerging and relationships among people arebecoming distant. People are becoming sophisticated and beginning to pursuitmoney, power and benefit rather than friendship, love and truth like somescenes in some tragic movies about future. It is so sad to go after profitblindly regardless of beautiful emotions among people.

To sum up, we indeed need development of world toimprove our life standards, but not that fast. As I discussed above, we aresupposed to slow steps to examine our environment and ourselves, in whichcondition can we make a great progress in the future.

作者: yagiliang 时间: 2013-10-25 00:11
改好啦

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-25 17:21
Do you agree that telephones are playing a more effective role than television in people’s life?

In modern society, advanced equipments such as telephones and televisionhave come into and are closely related to our daily lives. Telephones areextremely important to us as a perfect way of distant communication, especiallythe appearance of smart phone make our life more convenient and wonderful. Socomparable important are television as they are still the most popularapproaches that provide news and enjoyment as well as other information fromall over the world. However, the degrees of their importances differ fromperson to person.

For people who are younger or on the job,telephones are playing a more effective role, as these people always need tocommunicate with others. Office worker will discuss details about work withtheir colleague, and students often surf on the internet such as MSN or tweeterusing smart phone when they are not facing computer. On the other hand, theyspare little time on television. Firstly, they are so busy from morning tonight that once they have spare time they will go out to play with friendsrather than watch TV at home. What is more possible is that they hardly haveinterest on TV-program, so that television for them is just for decorate.

Television seems to be dominant among the type ofpeople who are older. As we can see, we live in a world where technology isaccumulated exponentially, as a result of which, old man whose minds cannotcatch up with the development will be unfamiliar to these technical devicessuch as smart phone. However, television has been popular since they wereyoung, therefore they might get used to watching TV. At the same time, onaccount of no-working, they have plenty of time to kill. Consequently, TVprograms especially teleplay and movies which take a long time to watch becometheir favorite activity.

To sum up, television and telephone which aregreat innovations, in my opinion, are all important to people. However, becauseof ages and other different characters of different people, each of them willhas a distinct decline.

作者: krystalgo 时间: 2013-10-25 21:36
改好了，哪里改的不好，多担待~加油

作者: yagiliang 时间: 2013-10-26 21:31
10.24的独立作文，希望还不会太晚，辛苦你的修改啦，谢谢
以下是链接http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-877065-4-1.html

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-27 14:10
Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math language, science and history.

Education improvement as the heatedly discussed issue has been controversial since it was raised up. Because of its crucial position in the modern social development ,the public and authorities are concerned with the way of education under scrutiny. As one of the topics, whether young children should be required to study art and music besides math, science and history has been mainly argued by almost all of teachers and parents. As far as I am concerned, those children are supposed to learn art and music.

We live in a world where knowledge and technology are accumulated exponentially and at the same time become stricter for people, in which condition, in order to make himself more competitive, he should be overall educated when he was a child. Knowledge only from books such as math and science are far from enough, other types of skill- i.e., portray, piano or violin are also need to find out more chances in the future. Take myself as an example. When I was in primary school, my parent advised me to learn guitar; after six year's study, I cannot believe I could play this instrument very well even be able to hold a small performance. This specialty made me a successful man today as I can find more opportunities and lucks when I ask for positions which call for versatility persons in college.

Furthermore, as one of the famous philosophers once said: “Math, history and music promote human's development”, we can see music is a form of intelligence of human. When children are applying their logic minds to solve math or physic problems but have no result, a piece of music or a colorful landscape may be a inspiration for them as these kind of artistic minds can refresh their brain like springs. A classic hero crosses my mind as an instance. Sherlock Holmes, a brilliant detective written by ConanDoyle, is so smart that almost all of cases can become pieces of cake. Besides his strong and rigor deduction, he also has a violin. When he falls into deepthinking, he plays his violin and claims that the fair-sounding music can help him think.

Given by the nowadays educational situation, young students have lots of subjects and homework stuff and they are too busy to even have a entertainment. Therefore, parents are less likely to encourage their children to learn art or music. However, instead of only considering about their educational level, schools should pay attention to development of their students and they ought to cut down some of their courses to leave more leisure for children.

To sum up, in aspect of their development in the future, young students should spend more time on the art and music. Only in this way can our society gain more all-rounder rather than people who can only solve a math equation.

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-27 16:24

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-27 16:39

linger0527 发表于 2013-10-27 16:24

谢谢小伙伴的批改~~~每一处都相当精彩及中肯~~looking forward the next time you come and correct my work!

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-27 16:40

修一一发表于 2013-10-27 16:39
谢谢小伙伴的批改~~~每一处都相当精彩及中肯~~looking forward the next time you come and correct my w ...

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-28 17:51
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.

We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated exponentially and at the same time become more and more specialized. Therefore, to be professional in a certain field today becomes gradually important. However, on no account should we ignore the status of people who possess different skills.

Specialists, who we all know are excel in one aspect such as science, art, sports and literature. There is no doubt that these people are supposed to concentrate on a subject rather than develop many other interests. Take NBA star Kobe Bryant as an example. Influenced by his father, Kobe started to play basketball when he was four years old and he showed a striking talent on it. After senior high school, in order to develop his basketball career, Kobe abandoned college life. During his 17 years career, he didn't try to learn something other but work hard every day. As he said:" you want to know why I am successful? I almost know about the look of LA every day.” he spared no effort to train, to play, and to win. He focused on only one skill but vastly amplified it. Until now, he is so successful that he has been wined 5 championship rings, which achieved by few person.

In another hand, there is increasing demand for generalists of our society. Lots of positions, especially administrators or managers need to be familiar with all aspects and develop many skills. It is conceivable that they don't have to learn a certain skill so deeply as specialists; all they need is to master it on shallow level. For instance, Steve Jobs, the former CEO of APPLE, is an outstanding manager. He knows some knowledge about electric principle, which are not as much as Wozniack did, he was familiar with art, from which he could design beautiful outlook of PC and telephone, and he understood how to manage and organize others' works. Based on such different skills, he could perform his ability in the area of IT and finally made a so great success---" have changed the world" as he claimed.

Nowadays, so many people have been successful depending on one certain skill and so many people also achieved their final goals as versatility generalists that we cannot judge which way is better. What we should do is to find out who we are. If you are a person who can concentrated on a subject but not likely to develop many skills, maybe you should go toward specialization and do your utmost to make a breakthrough. Probably you prefer to study some kinds of skill, and then you will be an excellent administrator. To sum up, as one of famous philosophers once said " Every man has its price", as long as you find out a suitable way, you will be succeed in the future.

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-28 20:32

作者: 用户名已被注册 时间: 2013-10-28 21:00
改好了~要是你觉得有什么不合理的地方和我说哦~

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-29 13:53
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: In modern times, parents will learn more from children than children learn from parents?

We live in a world where science and education are speedy stimulated and at the same time more and more advanced. Therefore, children live in today’s society know more knowledge than those in the past and most parents are claiming that they can learn a lot from their children. However, is it reasonable that parent will learn more from children than children learn from parents? Actually, the knowledge children can learn from their parents are more than we can image.

In terms of life, so precious are parents’ experiences that children are supposed to learn them. Parents have lived more twenty years in this world than their children. As one of old saying” they pass by bridges than their children’s roads”, they have experienced so much that they completely know how to deal with some problems which their children are not able to solve perfectly. Take myself as an example: one year ago, I had an argument with my best friend about scholarship as we both have qualification to win it. I asked help to my father, and he said” let it go; on no account should you give up friendship for some money”. Later I did what my dad told me to do. Not until few months ago when that friend helped me with an important matter did I realized importance of my father’s words and I still have a far way to learn more from him.

Furthermore, speaking of health, parents know much more than their children. Due to colorful activities, young children often stay up late and eat lots of junk food, which are bad for their health. They should learn some good habits from their parents since parents have lived through young time and are familiar with ways to keep healthy.

Nowadays, admittedly, children are more talented to learn something novel such as computer, internet, and smart phone. They are able to master these equipments even without deliberately learning. On the other hand, most of their parents cannot use them easily. It is conceivable that parents call for help from their children in this area.

To sum up, even though parents don’t understand plenty of things and need to learn from children, they indeed have abundant experiences that children ought to learn. The old principle “Parents are best teachers” will never out of date.

作者: wl441790417 时间: 2013-10-29 15:19
改好啦～改得不好的地方多担待啊，不同意见最好拿出来讨论讨论哈，要不我也不知道哪些对哪些不对。

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-29 16:05

wl441790417 发表于 2013-10-29 15:19
改好啦～改得不好的地方多担待啊，不同意见最好拿出来讨论讨论哈，要不我也不知道哪些对哪些不对。
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童鞋改滴很好，很细心~~谢谢啦~我也感觉我作文不大行，因为每次都要花1个半小时来写，不知道过后练练会不会有提高。你的建议不错~以后觉得有点chinglish的时候我就去google去搜搜哈哈~~~

作者: wl441790417 时间: 2013-10-29 17:29

修一一发表于 2013-10-29 16:05
童鞋改滴很好，很细心~~谢谢啦~我也感觉我作文不大行，因为每次都要花1个半小时来写，不知道过后练练会不 ...

恩的我也是考完GMAT之后忘光光了不太确定的就去google一下看看有没有类似的句子会在广告啦报告中啦出现的，会比较靠谱～

作者: krystalgo 时间: 2013-10-30 09:54
已经改完~加油

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-30 12:44

krystalgo 发表于 2013-10-30 09:54
已经改完~加油

童鞋你改的太好啦~都非常精彩~~学习啦！！！！thxxxxxxxxxx~~

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-30 13:39

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-30 15:37

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The effective leader tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision.

We live in a world where technology and knowledge are accumulated exponentially and at the same time more and more advanced. Therefore, the competition among different companies has become increasing severe. In that condition, whether a leader of a company is effective or not is an essential factor in modern society. As far as I am concerned, nothing is more important than making workers feel they have been part of a decision.

It is one of human’s natures that everyone will consider himself firstly. Therefore, when workers join the decision, they will try their utmost to make it more perfect and feasible to make sure that they will benefit from it in the future. If they are isolated from decision, it is conceivable that they will just accept other’s suggestion without considering. On the other hand; as an old saying goes:‘God will make a mistake in thousand times’, managers often make some unreasonable choices even though they are smart and well-experienced. Workers who make decision together will point out their boss’s mistakes. For instance, Cao Cao, one of most powerful emperors in Chinese history, is always gathering all his counselors to make decision even though he is an outstanding manager.

Furthermore, workers who take part in decision will devote themselves to it in the future. The reason why some good decision didn’t result in a satisfactory goal is that workers didn’t execute the decision with imputes. To make workers more energetic, leader is supposed to bring home to them that the decision is closed related to themselves, that is, to make workers feel they have been part of the decision.

Admittedly, there are many other factors which can help leaders to be effective such as bonus system and strict schedule. However, I believe that the most useful way is to involve workers into everything that they are related to.

To sum up, instead of sparing no effect to make a decision by himself, a leader ought to hold a meet to let his workers discuss about the whole subject, which is bounded up to their future.

作者: carmensh 时间: 2013-10-30 23:25

修一一发表于 2013-10-30 15:37
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The effective leader tries to make others fee ...

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不好意思上传晚了~~
修改经验不丰富，如有不周到之处还请见谅~~
ps.http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-871646-1-1.html 我的作文，谢谢！

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-31 13:16
你小伙伴我现在的心情：

（因为苹果事件）

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-10-31 13:57

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Twenty years from now, students will no longer use printed books.

We live in a world where science and technologies are developed exponentially and at the same time become more and more advanced. Therefore, our life has become more convenient, especially when we want to read some book or news, so brilliant is the e-book that it almost replace printed book. However, is it reasonable to give up all of our printed books? My answer is negative.

Admittedly, there is no denying that the advantages of e-book such as portable, high-capacity and economical almost overwhelm us. We are able to touch the electric screen to read any books we want in anywhere rather than hold thick books. Moreover, in order to read hundreds of books, all we need is to buy an e-book instead of paying much more to buy or borrow books from book store.

However, the default of e-book leaves much to be desired. As we can see in our campus, the number of people who wear glasses is sharply increasing. I believe that one of reasons why students’ visions are becoming worse is that they use e-book or something with an electric screen too frequent. It is widely acknowledged that the radiation and abnormal lights of these equipments have great influences on eyes. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. Even though there exist of some methods to help us relax our eyes, they cannot help us from the origin. Take myself as an example, when I was eleven, my father bought me an e-book for a gift, which was so fascinating to me that I almost read every book on it. As a result, my vision became terrible. All the methods I later tried to repair my vision were useless until I ceased to use the it. Therefore, it’s better for students to read printed books as many as possible.

Furthermore, printed book is great invention derived from our ancestor and they contain abundant ideas and wisdoms based on ink and paper. When I smell the odor of printed book, I am being completely addicted to the charming of it. What’ more, one of most famous philosophers once said: ‘If you don’t take a note, you would not able to study well’. Printed books are more convenient for us to jot some ideas down, whereas it is difficult to write something on an e-book.

By way of conclusion, I reaffirm the importance of printed books to our health and to reading itself. On no account should we ignore the value of printed books and abandon them in the future.

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-10-31 19:56

作者: 修一一 时间: 2013-11-2 12:51

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.

Said by Forrest Gump, ‘Life was like a box of chocolates, you never know what you’re going to get’. However, in order to pick a delicious one, we always need other’s advices. Fortunately, we may get lots of advices from many people such as peers and older friends and it is important to choose a better one to put it into effect. As far as I am concerned, advices from older friends are more valuable than those from friends of your own age.

It is conceivable that experiences of older friends are more abundantand and useful. Maybe what you are doing now is just what they were doing in their past. Since they have gone through this period, they are supposed to own plenty of experiences and lessons that are pretty precious to you. On the country, unless your peers have advancing situations, most of them are doing same work. Advices heard from them are probably one-sided. Take my classmate Sunny as an example. We were all fresh at the beginning of college life. As I still learn from other fresh, she began to meet some older students and ask some advices about college life and study, especially on subjects stuff. Later I found it was hard to follow her step as she always understood what should be done and what shouldn’t. As aresult, she got the first at the end of semester. From this true story came a conclusion that older friends’ advices are so valuable that we ought to comply with.

Furthermore, we live in a world where competitions are becoming more and more drastic. Even though we should get along with other peers, there is no denying that the competitions among peers make them more selfish and aggressive. There is no one but longs to get a number one, thus perhaps advices provided by them pose a great threat to their goal. Therefore, advices supplied by them maybe contain few values but kinds of thing that makes them seem enthusiastic.

Admittedly, because of our own personal conditions or speedy development of life environment, advices of order friends are maybe not practical to us. In addition, their advices would be too strict for us to implement. However, thei radvices are still the best choice we should choose.

By way of conclusion, as old saying goes:'an old bird will not to be catchedwith chaff', advices of older friends are more valuable than those of peers. Therefore, on no account should we ingore olders' suggestion.

作者: linger0527 时间: 2013-11-2 19:39