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标题: 【写作小分队】 Markk的作文帖子，就初中水平，往死里改吧 [打印本页]

作者: Markk丶 时间: 2013-9-1 22:07
标题: 【写作小分队】 Markk的作文帖子，就初中水平，往死里改吧
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Do you agree or disagree? It is better to work with your own computer and telephone at your home than work in your company's office.

Commonly, mostpeople is forced to work in company’s office. All colleagues are accustomed to usecompany’s computers and telephones, they have lunch together and even go to onlyone washing room.Theyeven think that’s great and necessary to work in company.But, as you know, I am a big fan of working alone athome, you may be hard to believe that. So let me raise a convincing example tobreak down this statement.

Working is aserious thing, and you should highlycentralize on it. But in company, something mayinfluences you unintentionally and makeyour efficiency lower. So having a quiet place to work is prettyimportant. That’s also why I agree It is better to work at your home than workin our company's office. Some people maybe think if it has other people at home,such as your parents, it’s not dissimilar to work in company. In my opinion, Itdoesn’t matter that your parents live with you together, you can tell them ‘Hi,mum and dad, I’m doing my work now, so please don’t disturb me.’ When you're at home, you can keep a silent environmentto focus on your work. That’s a truth, right?

Another advantage,when you at home, you can use your own phone and computer without any limit. Soit’s extraordinary comfortable to work with your familiartools. Despite the fact that it hardly impacts your work attitude, we can see itas a positive psychological hint. Besides, we couldn’t doubt its convenience. Wecan use it anytime and anywhere, not line up to use printer or public computer.I’m greatly convinced that it’s a wonderful way to improve our work efficiency.

All above thingsare crucial factors, if we lack anyone of those factors, it’s hardly to finishyour work effectively, and even fall in fail. So trying to apply for working athome, and you will receive a great benefit from it.

作者: 薄荷妹纸 时间: 2013-9-2 16:23

批改好啦..~ 编辑过后木有颜色所以只有传附件了。

作者: Markk丶 时间: 2013-9-2 18:14