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标题: 呱唧的作文楼！9.15二战啦｡ﾟヽ(ﾟ´Д`)ﾉﾟ｡(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑) [打印本页]

作者: binxinxie 时间: 2013-8-23 15:43
标题: 呱唧的作文楼！9.15二战啦｡ﾟヽ(ﾟ´Д`)ﾉﾟ｡(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)
8.23 开始！写的好慢！ANYWAY...
请大家多留些意见让暴风雨更猛些吧！！！

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作者: 普渡哥 时间: 2013-8-23 22:41
To begin with, the study involving liquid hand soaps currently used in hospitals and UltraClean hand soap is open to doubt without showing detailed information towards how exactly the experiments is done. 这句话很别扭。

作者: binxinxie 时间: 2013-8-23 23:05

普渡哥发表于 2013-8-23 22:41
To begin with, the study involving liquid hand soaps currently used in hospitals and UltraClean hand ...

读了一遍！的确糊在一起了！๑•́ ₃ •̀
without showing detailed information towards how exactly the experiments is done, the study involving hand soaps used in hospitals and Ultra Clean hand soap is open to doubt
WITHOUT提前了不知道会不会好点

作者: hellovivien 时间: 2013-8-24 10:55
Done By Vivien

作者: vincentso 时间: 2013-8-24 11:57
done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

作者: binxinxie 时间: 2013-8-24 13:50
谢谢大家，写ARGUE想写的点太多果然容易激动然后语句词汇错误一堆....

作者: Rainbeauty 时间: 2013-8-26 18:35
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作者: bitemilk 时间: 2013-8-27 16:59
已改，请查收。水平很高哦

作者: 小龙虾 时间: 2013-9-5 18:44
十分抱歉晚了晚了
新手上路还不知道原来每天的arhu 和 issue 不是一个人改的我还在说另一个咋没有argu 呢多多谅解

作者: zyq645 时间: 2013-9-7 21:34
已经改好啦！

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