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作者: yiranmumuxi 时间: 2013-6-14 10:23
标题: 求教一个问题，og13 137题平行并列问题
"Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer are examples of the kind of composer who receives popular acclaim while living, often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again.

(A) often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again
(B) whose reputation declines after death and never regains its status again
(C) but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status
(D) who declines in reputation after death and who never regained popularity again
(E) then has declined in reputation after death and never regained popularity

这里的答案为什么可以选择c呢？如果我选c的话这里的and不就不能形成平行并列了嘛？
同时一直有疑问，逗号+but后面连接的不应该是一个独立的句子嘛？这里似乎不符合要求啊

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2013-6-14 10:39
这里选C最主要的原因就是句子的意思要前后相符。

作者: 云游 时间: 2013-6-14 12:03
少年，做题不要只想着语法，语义也很重要，读完一遍句子应该就知道原句要表达“J&G他们生前名望一时而死后身败名裂”的意思，所以必须出现一个表示转折的连词。而且C中but后面的就是独立的句子~

作者: chineuro 时间: 2013-6-14 14:14
Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer are examples of the kind of composer who receives popular acclaim while living, often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again.

(A) often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again
(B) whose reputation declines after death and never regains its status again
(C) but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status
(D) who declines in reputation after death and who never regained popularity again
(E) then has declined in reputation after death and never regained popularity

这里的答案为什么可以选择c呢？如果我选c的话这里的and不就不能形成平行并列了嘛？
为什么不平行？and前后的declines/regains是平行的啊，decline作“下降”意时本来就是不及物的，后面没法跟宾语。平行结构也并非要求结构完全一模一样。
同时一直有疑问，逗号+but后面连接的不应该是一个独立的句子嘛？这里似乎不符合要求啊
but不是非得连接句子啊，连词可以连接很多东西，名词，不定式，分词，从句，都可以。
这里就是连接两个并列的定语从句。1，who receives popular acclaim 2， whose reputation declines
BD的错误在于reputation declines after death and never regains its status这两个表述不能割裂开来与receives popular acclaim while living并列，要构成意思上的平行结构必须合在一起。
A和E都试图三段式平行，但后两段动宾结构和和第一段的从句结构不平行。

作者: kevinjpcn 时间: 2013-6-14 14:14
此题，but + whose从句，是正确的。
又例如 he said that A... and that B... 这里and连接两个that从句也是可以的。
此题，用排除法也可以选到C，排除法的方法是：
A, B, D 中的regain和again重复，不能选。
E是指composer decline，也不能选（因为人不能decline，只能人的名誉decline).

作者: 蜜蜜蜜蜜蜜 时间: 2013-10-12 21:12
这主语都不一样怎么就平行了呢？？

作者: muxiadai 时间: 2013-11-7 11:17

蜜蜜蜜蜜蜜发表于 2013-10-12 21:12
这主语都不一样怎么就平行了呢？？

可以的，我也是在别人的千行excel整理中看到的：
who和whose可以平行么？（Ron）：

the correct answer (c) contains 2 modifiers in a parallel structure. in such a construction, both parallel modifiers modify the same thing. (this is how parallel structures work in general, anyway: both parts of ANY parallel structure must have the same grammatical function.)

for instance,
i have a friend who can sing and whose dog can dance.
--> in this sentence, “who can sing” and “whose dog can dance” both modify “friend”.
the same is true with the two modifiers “who receives popular acclaim…” and “whose reputation declines…” in the correct answer to this problem。

作者: yxb394919251 时间: 2013-11-7 15:26
ABD很容易排除，then只有形容词和副词的词性，不能引导一个有动词has的句子吧？而且从时态上，选项部分的时态没有理由不和前面的receives相同。

作者: cdbgin009 时间: 2013-12-21 02:56

chineuro 发表于 2013-6-14 14:14
Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer are examples of the kind of composer who receives popular acclaim ...

两个定语从句平行，who..., but whose...

另外，regains和again是冗余的

作者: 一只酵母君 时间: 2016-5-27 20:23
Choice C, the best answer, maintains parallel structure, keeps verb tense consistent, and contains no redundancies. Choice A illogically suggests that it is the composer who goes into decline after death, rather than the composer’s reputation. Choice A may also be faulted for the redundancy of never regains... again. Choice B is not correct. Grammatically, a coordinating conjunction (e.g., “but”) is needed to join the clause whose reputation declines... with the preceding clause, who receives popular acclaim.... Furthermore, the phrase never regains... again suffers from redundancy. Choices D and E suffer from inconsistency in verb tense. To maintain parallelism the verbs must be receives... declines... regains.

作者: meiyw 时间: 2016-12-21 16:30
我理解楼主的意思，我也是做题时候发现，逗号+but/and是不一定连接独立的句子，只要前后平行即可了。

作者: meiyw 时间: 2016-12-21 16:36
加不加逗号都可以。
often, the comma will be omitted when there are two complete clauses -- if those clauses are short enough to render the comma unnecessary.
also -- again quite often -- a comma will be included even if the structures are not complete clauses, especially if the structures are long enough to make the sentence essentially unreadable without the comma.
for instance:
i shut the windows and locked the doors --> this sentence doesn't need any additional punctuation.
i shut the windows so firmly that i would later have trouble opening them, and locked the doors using both the standard locks and the deadbolts --> these are not complete clauses, but the sentence is still written with the comma, because it's absolutely unreadable without the comma (try it yourself).

MOST IMPORTANTLY
PUNCTUATION IS NOT TESTED ON THIS EXAM!

附上这段话，以便有后面的同学看。

作者: kisscedric 时间: 2017-6-3 00:46
对于正确的C选项，but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status。我想问一下大家，it指代是指代composer还是谁呢？看国外的网站，ron说指代composer's reputation. 但是我不太理解为什么是指代reputation，谢谢大家。

作者: GMAT要上700 时间: 2017-10-10 10:17

kevinjpcn 发表于 2013-6-14 14:14
此题，but + whose从句，是正确的。
又例如 he said that A... and that B... 这里and连接两个that从句也 ...

同意！

作者: GMAT要上700 时间: 2017-10-10 10:39

kevinjpcn 发表于 2013-6-14 14:14
此题，but + whose从句，是正确的。
又例如 he said that A... and that B... 这里and连接两个that从句也 ...

这里的its没有模糊性吗？

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